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The girls have uncovered the mystery of their disappearing friends, but are now on the run from the predatory Hostesses who have just flushed their dearest teacher and the mother chaperones. The Last Honeyburst Lodge is a place of many surprises, though. How long do these cuties think they can remain unflushed by girl-devouring toilets and their mistresses of sexual fantasies?
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Posted by Critchett 8 years ago Report
I do so love comments and chatting about my works and readers' wants and desires!
Posted by ShadesofBlack 8 years ago Report
SPOILERS
Oh my goodness! The way the pink hostess had linked herself to her victims... for the longest time it felt like she was somehow linked to the toilet, and that the oblivion was somehow inside her. Love how it turned out though. So this is what some of the hostesses have to gain from guiding girls down the tubes! It means they get to experience it repeatedly in relative safety!
Posted by Critchett 8 years ago Report
*AUTHOR'S POSSIBLE SPOILER*
How do you know she's not linked to both and was tricked into consuming herself in an eternal self-swallowing cycle? ;)
That's very good insight you have on it all! I love hearing your thoughts on it!
Posted by Drakira 8 years ago Report
I was glad to finally see a nice diaper gulp, but I do love the description on the vacuum vore, and can't wait for someone to get slurped up one of those, and also I would like to see side stories (like the toilet training one) based on the ideas as well.
Posted by Critchett 8 years ago Report
So glad you enjoyed it, Drakira! There will be lots more diaper love to come, the Vacuum will have its turn for sure, and once I wrap up the Gate prologue series to Dissolutia, I'll be writing many other side stories in the same vein. = )
Posted by grz01 5 years ago Report
I love your very descriptive vacuum vore, hope you come back to do more of this.