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An unearthly entity from another dimension uses its strange control over space and matter to gobble up several lovely ladies on Halloween night. A direct sequel to Midnight Feast.
Happy Halloween everyone! This is a bit of a short one, and almost didn't happen at all (thanks to Ben for poking me earlier this month) in time.
I still fully intend to write a proper followup to this little appetizer, with more sexy girls in sexy costumes getting eaten up by weird fleshy, mutated apertures/objects/locations. Plans include a voracious bathtub-maw, a possessed garden at a costume party, and an entire Japanese maid cafe getting vored.
If this little 'preview' is popular, I'll see about getting to work on a more filling entry with this theme. Perhaps I'll run a poll later, on what sort of Halloween story everyone would most like to see for next year.
In any case, have a great Halloween, everyone!
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Posted by averyhillpeak 7 years ago Report
This was pretty fun :)
But I will say I think I prefer your monsters that talk and toy with their Prey. But these gulp fests are also really fun.
Keep up the good work and those other ideas sound cool, I like the Bathtub and Maid Cafe ideas.
Posted by PrinnyDood 7 years ago Report
Thanks!
And yeah, while I do enjoy the idea of an ineffable, voracious predator devouring prey without the niceties of dialog, there's also something really appealing about a running banter between predator and prey.
Fortunately, I do have another story in the works featuring a conversational dragon and several naughty princess types, which you might enjoy. And of course I still want to eventually write that sequel to Cheerleaders in Space, with the polite alien lizard returning to eat up a bunch of sexy purple space-girls. So I should have a fair amount of banter-heavy vore in the future. ;3
Posted by averyhillpeak 7 years ago Report
Those do sound fun :)
I look forward to seeing them :D
Posted by psychoboy07 7 years ago Report
Got your PM and read through this earlier today but wasn't able to reply til now. Harvest season and neighbor kids with their game consoles tying up the Internet and other stuff like that. >_<
Loved the story and the ending was especially well done. Leave your creation and audience hungry for more.
The bathtub maw sounds especially intriguing gas you could definitely revamp the Rugrats take on it into something for a more mature-ish, fetishy audience. 3:)
Posted by psychoboy07 7 years ago Report
Starts at 00:45. Enjoy!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SOTTZqZY4aA
Posted by PrinnyDood 7 years ago Report
Thanks! It was definitely done in a bit of a rush, so I'm glad it came out decently enough. Gonna run a poll at some point to see what everyone would most like for next Halloween, and the 'full' followup to this will certainly be one of the options, along with a few other possibilities.
Ahh, I hadn't ever seen that Rugrats clip before, thanks. I am really interested in exploring how this predator can kinda possess/superimpose/warp areas and objects, so when/if I manage a proper sequel, there should be a lot more in that vein.
Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report
Well, that was rather pleasing. :p So nice of those tasty young ladies to group themselves together like that, in one convenient bunch!
Posted by PrinnyDood 7 years ago Report
Thanks!
I kinda have a running tradition of Halloween vore, that goes back quite a few years, so I really had to do something to mark the occasion. :3
Posted by anais2000 7 years ago Report
And you worried your writing might get stale! :)
Once again we have a normal situation turned upside-down with well-defined characters.
Now there are some new things as well... The creature has some specialized gastric juices that only dissolve clothing? I thought anything that could do that would also liquefy the women, but it seems this entity obeys different laws... :)
Posted by PrinnyDood 7 years ago Report
Well, thanks, though I'm not sure how much I managed to divert from my typical formula, I did at least add a few things that are relatively new.
And yes, the dissolving clothes thing is something I've seen before but never had in one of my stories. And I even have a nonsense-science explanation: the prey creatures the entity 'naturally' consumed (before it found earth women ;p) have a physical makeup more similar to synthetic fabric compared to life on earth. Thus it digests those materials quite rapidly, while the nubile YUMs require a bit more time and patience for their digestion. But don't worry - it gets the job done eventually.
And yes, that means that cotton or wool garments would not be so quickly dissolved. The more you know! x3
Posted by longwayofftiff 5 years ago Report
Again. Too powerful. Not even fair. I protest. I'm
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report
Haha, but weren't you just complaining that giant frogs were too easy? Why not take a swing at this thing, eh? xD
But yeah, now that you mention it, this creature may actually be the most overpowered predator I've ever written. I mean, it fills up almost a whole dimension by itself . . . how the heck do you even damage that? At least the (comparatively) tiny mouths and tentacles it pokes through into our reality are susceptible to physical harm just like anything else. Even if it can just grow more as it needs them.
Posted by longwayofftiff 5 years ago Report
Planting a device that creates a singularity implosion is a way to actually destroy it.
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report
Yeah, something like that is probably your best bet, assuming you're device can generate a big enough boom. Or, does an implosion maybe go 'moob', instead? xP
Of course, first you gotta somehow trick it into actually eating the bomb, which might be a little dicey - this thing isn't dumb.
Unless of course you had some gizmo to make portals directly into its parallel reality, that would make the whole thing a lot more straightforward . . . Probably.