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Alice's persistence in soliciting the Rabbit's help finally comes to a head, and they reach an understanding.
She won't be going home any time soon.
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Not sure if the text placement reads sequentially in the right order or not for new viewers. Let me know if it doesn't and I'll change it.
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Posted by VixieMoondew 7 years ago Report
Holy crap, this is phenomenal. I haven't the words, but clearly you do!
Posted by ryanshowseason3 7 years ago Report
Amazing piece. Wasn't sure when to read the bottom part but I got it.
Although I'm not a fan of this particular rhyming scheme where you rhyme the last lines of each part. Doesn't make it as attractive to read aloud or I'd recommend getting someone to read it. There's a couple female voice actors looking for requests/commissions.
Is the picture on her way in though? Or being pulled back out?
Posted by FaultyVault 7 years ago Report
Yeah I didn't put too much thought into the rhyming scheme. Writing isn't really my forte. I kind of just winged it. Some bits rhyme more than others. Some bits break the scheme because I couldn't formulate it in a way that I liked with the restrictions I imposed.
The image is depiction the final passage. I guess it's not as obvious as I hoped, but I figured both having it placed to the right of the rhyme as well as the state Alice kind of gave that impression.
Posted by Groblek 7 years ago Report
Wow, that's amazing. Not only did you put a story with one of your so-evocative images, but *poetry*. Very well done!
Posted by joeburp22181 7 years ago Report
Nice work!
Posted by deaddonkey 7 years ago Report
Love this piece. I didn't think the ordering of the text was confusing or anything, context makes everything obvious anyway. The writing is better than one would expect for something like this! Always love your art.
Posted by FaultyVault 7 years ago Report
Happy to hear it reads the right way, as I really don't know how I could alter the layout to fit any better xD
Posted by magicalgypsyllama 7 years ago Report
This is absolutely incredible! Keep it up man this is amazing! You're so talented :o
Posted by Chaotic 7 years ago Report
Very very nice! I'm hoping this isn't the last Alice themed picture you do. Especially since there's so little American McGee Alice vore out there in general. Oh and the text layout wasn't a problem for me at least. Great stuff.
Posted by FaultyVault 7 years ago Report
The psychological horror and fantastical elements of American McGee's Alice really does seem to lend itself to cruel vore. I don't have any concrete plans to make further Alice themed stuff, but there's a reasonable chance it will make an appearance on future sketch sheets, so who knows?
Posted by caty6662000 7 years ago Report
dark .. I love it
Posted by DesuDesuKawaiiChan 7 years ago Report
This terrifies and amazes me. Your art is... Really wonderdul. Everything fits together, I got the context, and the way it is together reminds me of a childrens tale. The context was clear, at least to me, and was beautifully done. I'm really impressed with your work. It is so hauntingly beautiful. It's gritty, and dark, yet sexy, and intimate.
Keep up the good work.
Posted by FaultyVault 7 years ago Report
It's a relief to hear it reads well. Children's tale is what I was going for. I find traditionally innocent settings work well for making something sinister.
Posted by DesuDesuKawaiiChan 7 years ago Report
I AGREE!
:×
Posted by Bright 7 years ago Report
Nice poem.
Posted by Vdiem 5 years ago Report
you've made the hair really cute.
Posted by SherlokKirya 1 year ago Report
Alice exhausted expression is honestly just so terrifying, slime all around it and foot holding her hair - makes up a truly sadistic picture to behold.
" "You've been there for a while, are you having much fun ?" I ask her with guile: feign the care of a nun"
has to be my favourite line from this poetry. It doesn't always rhyme but I can see you put an effort into this, was much an ejoyable read.