Posted by Morphy 8 years ago Report

This explains so much... Hah!

I'd still waiting for the other shoe to drop after a few months. Would Twilight send a letter asking for another "vacation"? What if the other Princesses get wind out this deviant behavior? Pretty sure Celestia is oblivious but Luna could find out should she drop into an errant dream of Twilight's.

Not really sure Chrysalis would get anywhere as much love if she gave Luna a "vacation". Now Celestia and all of Equestria's adoring ponies? Oof, that'd make Chryssy faaaaaaat. :D

Posted by Firefanatic 8 years ago Report

Barely heard from Chrysalis' stomach, Twilight spits up the extra sludge that she couldn't stomach for her own sake, before whimpering, "Hi girls... help me."

Posted by PegaSUS 8 years ago Report

So, would it be that gross to re-eat what your own practical clone swallows down to their stomach? (Well, I probably wouldn't do it. Eugh.)

This is just adorable, though! At this rate, Chrysalis is going to forget that Twilight's in her. Excellent series, man! You know how to handle this stuff.

Posted by thorondraco 8 years ago Report

lilterally by tommorrow she woulda been found out.
seriously, why no one realize how terrible and actor chrysalis and changeligns in generaly really are? terrible at foresight

Posted by Shrabby 8 years ago Report

She has learned

Posted by thorondraco 8 years ago Report

unlikely dude.

just saying its part of her characterization. a severe lack fo foresight

Posted by justanothermeal 8 years ago Report

she adressed that problem last page, she made twi explain all of her duties so she wouldnt be found out, and twi's subjects wouldnt be abandoned. for the sake of her subjects twi has to help her maintain the facade

Posted by Jackal3 8 years ago Report

it is kinda true, and that's kinda sad too. they don't do much in terms of research on there targets. i still question how did that invasion happen. Luna can use her dream watching abilities. the changelings would be found out the moment they either slept in disguise or their prey slept, i can't get over that big giant loophole

Posted by sevensix 7 years ago Report

Maybe they got Luna first (somehow). But then (of course) there's the sun-and-moon issue. Inside job!

Posted by zarpaulus 8 years ago Report

Eating for two.

Posted by Jackal3 8 years ago Report

soooooo, could there be like an epilogue of queen chrysalis crapping out twilight like she said she would, or something like that? i just want to see twilight get shat out, that was hot.

Posted by sevensix 7 years ago Report

I'd suggest commissioning it, but their Commission Status page has some mixed messages.

Posted by FanficFetishist 8 years ago Report

Weeks later, after Chrysalis gets bored and lets Twilight out...

Chrysalis: Now, I know you're mad.

Twilight: *grinning evilly*

Celestia: *burning with fury*

Chrysalis: *scared shitless* And I perfectly understand why! AFter all, I should NEVER have eaten your dear student!

Celestia: No kidding.

Chrysalis: However... ah... *desperately thinking* Before you murder me into little pieces...

Celestia: I was thinking something more ironic, actually...

Twilight: *puts on a bib, licking her lips*

Chrysalis: EEP! Um... Oh please let this work... Before you do something rash, I'd like to explain my point of view!

Celestia: Oh really? How.

Chrysalis: *grabs Twilight and shoves her halfway down Celestia's throat*

Twilight: WHA!?

Celestia: *pauses, looking surprised*

Chrysalis: See? She's delicious!

Celestia: *gulps her down, licking her lips*

Chrysalis: And she squirms real nice, too!

Celestia: *blushing* Yeah, she does...

Twilight: OH, COME ON!

Chrysalis: So, we good?

Celestia: I think so. Just... be careful in the future. I'm gonna go... enjoy this...

Chrysalis: *sigh of relief*

Twilight: *incoherent screams of rage*

Celestia: *blissful moaning*

Posted by Dirtyhooves 8 years ago Report

plot twist, she develops stockholm syndrome and this becomes a regular thing.

Posted by VorishSnivy7 7 years ago Report

Is she going to be ok?