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Love and lust make people do stupid things. They don't think right and can't seem to see things clearly. Well, Big Angie has been bitten by the love bug and decides to try to eat less and get in shape in order to get closer to her new friend, Ian. A pred can't just deny their hunger and sooner or later that hunger is going to need satisfied.
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Posted by MrQuarantine 7 years ago Report
Pretty solid story man. I feel this one was little more tame than usual, but I think it was actually a welcome change of pace. As always can't wait to see what you write next.
Posted by D3adZ3d 7 years ago Report
Thanks! Working on trying to improving my writing skills and not rehashing same old scenarios. Glad you liked it and there are always more stories to come!
Posted by JackNoName 7 years ago Report
Hahaaaa, loved it. Poor angie, all that work for nothing...
Posted by D3adZ3d 7 years ago Report
Not completely nothing. She did get a nice meal in the end as well. Angie will be fine, she's a real tough girl. Its like her mom always told her: "There are plenty of fish in the sea, and if that fish isn't right for you they're still good enough to eat!"
Posted by JackNoName 7 years ago Report
Gotta say, I really like how you made a super cheesy trope and short story so enjoyable. It just oozes character. I can just see that trainer running ahead of her, calling behind him, so funny. You sometimes do fall into repetition in the beginning, a trap I often fall into too, quite a lot.... Anyway, good stuff, had a lot of fun reading it on a easy sunday morning.
Posted by glargicus 7 years ago Report
Great story man!
Posted by D3adZ3d 7 years ago Report
Thank you! Glad you liked it!
Posted by Noeman 1 year ago Report
actually so good I was kinda bummed by the twist at the end, was waiting for a rare wholesom(ish), but mostly smutty ending. Still pretty comedic tho, good shit.