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Link explores a ranch.
That's really all there is to say. If you know anything about the two gals who live on this ranch, I think you know exactly what's going to happen next.
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Posted by Myetche 8 years ago Report
I do love the detail you're putting into this, but I want to ask something... since he can already cheat the laws of physics with his mouth and ass, have you ever considered maybe having Link cock-vore someone?
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Considered but I don't really have a plan for it. I wanted to focus on the rump and mouth with this series. ^^
Posted by Myetche 8 years ago Report
Fair enough. I just thought maybe Link could get the full trifecta of vore involved.
Posted by Malezor 8 years ago Report
Great! FAV chapter so far, especialy Romani! :D
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Thanks! Glad you liked it. I was definitely looking forward to writing the Romani chapter. She's such a fun character.
Posted by Draconatedz 8 years ago Report
I was enjoying this a lot until it turned into non-fatal endo. It's kind of jarring to have it suddenly end differently from all the other stories in this series because of some unexplained regret magic that makes everything work out in the end. I'm not sure what makes Romani and Cremia any different that they avoid digestion, other than you feeling like you might offend people because they aren't "nameless and faceless" like most of the side characters you've depicted Link as digesting and disposing of.
I think it would have been a lot more enjoyable and interesting to have him have to deal with the guilt of digesting and disposing them like any other meal.
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
I guess I explained it poorly in story. The milk messes up Link's digestion in the opposite way that the potions did. The potions made his digestion stronger; the milk weaker. It wasn't an intention of his. It's how it happened because I thought it would be funny to have his health tonics screw with his gut.
Sorry you disliked it so much. >_<
Posted by Draconatedz 8 years ago Report
Ah I see, at least that makes it a bit more sensible.
Hey, don't mind me, it's just my preference. It just felt out of place in a series like this.
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
No no. It's totally fair criticism. And I appreciate you voicing your thoughts. :)