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The magic medicine By CreativeWriter -- Report

A commission I did for  Max123.

The young witch Cassandra sneaks into Umbra's castle to get a magic crystal with healing powers to cure her sister who had been cursed. But then the invisibility spell wears off right when she stands in front of Umbra, who felt very hungry at that moment...

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darc22005

Posted by darc22005 8 years ago Report

Faved to read later, looked good

MrQuarantine

Posted by MrQuarantine 8 years ago Report

Good job man. I like that Umbra stuck to her evil personality and didn't care for Cassandra's curse. I liked how the solution to the sisters problem was being eaten by Umbra lol.

CreativeWriter

Posted by CreativeWriter 8 years ago Report

Thanks. I thought it might be a nice conclusion to have the sister being eaten as well, so she would get some greater role in this and also be "cured". ;)