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James has finally told Hilde what he thinks of her. She therefore decides to cheer him up by taking him to the happiest place on Earth. Special thanks to Chaos for helping me with this one. Any suggestions on what should happen next?
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Posted by Squall 8 years ago Report
Suggestions? You left the story on a cliffhanger by him saying there were people at school for her to "play" with. Maybe you could use that as a setup, but then fast forward to when she's 18. As an author who has an oc that can also change size at will, how I describe it is different, plus I limit her size based on the situation. You could add some mild incest in there, as she can't seem to control herself. I am glad though that you turned this into a lesson for her. A few future titles for you to think about: "Hilda impregnates the school", "Hilda and the mean girls", "Hilda and the best/worst day ever", "Hilda and her overconsumption", "Hilda becomes a superhero"
I enjoyed this story.
Posted by crime0edge 8 years ago Report
Thanks for the suggestions
Posted by ddrg12 8 years ago Report
oh my gosh yes.... this has to be one of the sexiest stories ive ever read
Posted by crime0edge 8 years ago Report
Thanks a lot
Posted by sorrow999 8 years ago Report
Hilde is my favorite character of yours
Posted by crime0edge 8 years ago Report
Thanks
Posted by crushxtreame 7 years ago Report
I like the end
Posted by DanceMovesFutanariverse 5 years ago Report
Wow that was actually surprisingly wholesome and very sweet ;u;
I hope to see more of them as a ragtag team where the brother could maybe even help advice his newfound sister on normal people customs if she actually ever wanted a real relationship instead of sex toys:D