*Corey walks by with a stack of books and a locker key opens his locker and puts them away takesout a sword and shield closes his locker lockes it and walks off without noticing anything wierd*
You're a poop head... There. A mean comment (even if it's not entirely true). Now you won't get too big of a head over your good work! lol x3 gotta keep you wild writers in check, I say!
Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 7 years ago Report
Oh boy this looks good, can't wait. I usually don't read stories but I'm a sucker for this setting
Posted by HypnoBitch 7 years ago Report
I hope its satisfactory~.
Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 7 years ago Report
It's got a huge sexy dragon boy predator eating his friend, it's off to a very good start
Posted by HypnoBitch 7 years ago Report
Well, I wanted to immediately drag the readers in with a sudden situation.
Posted by HypnoBitch 7 years ago Report
Please keep in mind that this is just a sneak peek. I welcome all criticism.
Posted by Buford91 7 years ago Report
Nice
Posted by HypnoBitch 7 years ago Report
:D THANKS!~<3
Posted by sharky 7 years ago Report
more !!
Posted by CoreyTheDragon 7 years ago Report
*Corey walks by with a stack of books and a locker key opens his locker and puts them away takesout a sword and shield closes his locker lockes it and walks off without noticing anything wierd*
Posted by HypnoBitch 7 years ago Report
Lol~
Posted by BNCrazy 7 years ago Report
That is actually kinda funny. "Just another day at school." At least if he doesn't get his money, he'll get his money's worth! ;d
Posted by HypnoBitch 7 years ago Report
^-^ I'm so happy there are all these positive comments!
Posted by BNCrazy 7 years ago Report
You're a poop head... There. A mean comment (even if it's not entirely true). Now you won't get too big of a head over your good work! lol x3 gotta keep you wild writers in check, I say!
Posted by HypnoBitch 7 years ago Report
Lol~ Thank you~
Posted by CoreyTheDragon 7 years ago Report
Some how i managed to fit a 3 meter sword in a locker thats one foot by one foot by a meter.
Posted by HypnoBitch 7 years ago Report
???
Posted by CoreyTheDragon 7 years ago Report
¿¿¿
Posted by BNCrazy 7 years ago Report
(?o?)
Posted by HypnoBitch 7 years ago Report
^3^
Posted by BNCrazy 7 years ago Report
So much was said with so few characters. Amazing. :D
Posted by HypnoBitch 7 years ago Report
Indeed~<3
Posted by eatmeplease 7 years ago Report
Actually, to answer the question in the first sentence, yes I have. X3
Posted by HypnoBitch 7 years ago Report
Lol~<3
Posted by eatmeplease 7 years ago Report
But that's cause I like willing vore.
Posted by HypnoBitch 7 years ago Report
Don't worry. Some chapters will have willing vore. The next one, in fact, chapter 2. I'm gonna publish it maybe tomorrow.
Posted by eatmeplease 7 years ago Report
Okie cool!