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Amira, the Saddle Arabian delegate, as well as her husband and child, return to ponyville to meet with Twilight. Unknown to Amira, she would soon decide to remain among her new friends
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Posted by BatfinK16 7 years ago Report
This was great. Do you think you'll do a sequel?
Posted by ArcaneSigil 7 years ago Report
Eventually. I'm holding off on them for now because I've reached the end of my "Free Chapters" section. If I remember correctly, I have my pricing up somewhere.
Posted by Rubiont-47 2 years ago Report
Puzzled a little that they have visited CMC to get cutiemark and then CMC finds Amira to ask why they do not have a one. Are they was not suppoused to try and get them cutiemarks?
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It lovely to see unbirth, but the way the story going. . . Hm. I do not understand why Amira is unbirth Spike so easy without second through. It is feels so casually as If she doing it from time to time with others. But then cknfusing why she have decided to abandon the kingdom only for the Spike.
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Posted by ArcaneSigil 2 years ago Report
I didn't actually clarify with this one, but Amira, as the queen of Saddle Arabia, had concubines who would disappear into her folds or her rear, never to be seen again, so it wasn't out of character for her to stuff Spike into her womb. As for abandoning her kingdom... she has daughters. And Saddle Arabia is like old fashioned Egypt or other nations like that from way back in time. It's not unfounded for a father to marry his own daughter if the wife disappears.
Posted by Rubiont-47 2 years ago Report
Oh. So your preds still could do fatal.
Posted by ArcaneSigil 2 years ago Report
Could yes, but typically don't since I don't like fatal.