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Things take a turn for the dramatic when Marunomi's absorption jutsu begins to take its toll on her. Meanwhile, Hinata make preparations for their upcoming battle.
Well, this is it. I've been uploading chapters of my stories for the past week or so, but I'm afraid this is where it ends. Oh no, that doesn't mean I'm done writing, it's just that, in all likelihood, I won't be uploading a chapter tomorrow. Currently, I'm still writing my way through Marunomi's Revenge so it's pretty much my main priority right now, writing-wise. Hopefully, I should have the next chapter uploaded within a few days.
Well, I hope you guys have enjoyed this little splurge of chapters (and, again, I apologize for any and all writing mistakes) and I hope you'll wait patiently and continue to read in the future. Thanks again!
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Posted by Flame14 7 years ago Report
Honestly I had really been hoping to see Marunomi eat Tsunade, but absorbing her simply make too much sense. It's actually quite similar to something I started in an interactive story on Writing.com, though the ones doing the take over were Hinata Shadow Clones intent on being able to live their own lives, but hey, same difference.
So the girls need to activate the 'bomb' and somehow get it inside of Marunomi. Hm, I'm sensing a repeat of what Sakura did the first time coming, but would Marunomi fall for it?
Posted by Ginga 7 years ago Report
Will we see her get yugito
Posted by Deviantfan16 7 years ago Report
Well that went from bad to worse quickly.
Posted by BlueMarvel611 7 years ago Report
Hey Nobodyman, great to see you with another chapter. Though shame really on not being really able to see another chapter tomorrow but that's fine. But if it means that I look forward to seeing a greatly written chapter from you then I don't mind the waiting...especially given if it means to calm my nerves over my coming job. Enough on my problems in life so on with the review for this chapter.
Okay to begin we shift to Kurenai's group along with those of the Cloud Village as they rested in another village to prepare to face Marunomi. Mostly the mood they were in when discussing the plan of how to dispel the Absorption Jutsu. Hinata looked so hopeful along with Ino for hoping to free the people of the Pebble Village...only to be hit with the reality that it's not possible given what Marunomi did with Kaori in the last chapter. Hinata especially looked dishearten at the news she learned about the fate of the villagers...I still feel sorry for little Kaori. I especially can't wait to see when they arrive back to the Hidden Leaf Village.
Now we shift to the main antagonist of the story, Marunomi herself. From what I'm looking at it would seem that Marunomi was beginning to lose her grip on her absorption jutsu...or what seems to be losing it anyways. To begin she was slipping up in her Sakura guise while doing some healing jutsu exercises while trying to stave off her big hunger which seems to be growing by the minute. Having to hold out on living prey must really be taking it's toll on her when she holds out on lunch. It did come to a head when it turns out that her massive drain on chakra was due to a drink Tsunade gave to her. Got to hand it to the female Hokage given that she's no one's fool as she was able to spot Marunomi's disguise given.
Oh and your fight sequence between Marunomi and Tsunade was totally amazing. Not to mention that it so sounds like something from the manga/anime of the series. Man I got chills up my spine as I was on my seat when Tsunade finally overpowered her. But Marunomi got an ace up her sleeve as she used her first meal, Sakura, unconscious face to get Tsunade off guard and managed to absorb her into her being. Not just that but since becoming the Hokage she now has access to the profile of everyone in the village...which leads to that one girl aide, Yukari, into going into her stomach. Honestly really hot picturing Tsunade with a big vore belly on her. Anyways back to the point, no doubt that from this point, Marunomi's now got access to live meals she can choose from...but how long will that last? No doubt that those jutsus are reaching their limits. I'll just have to wait and see...well, at least WHO would be Marunomi's next meal.
On a final note, you did good with narrating through Anko's perspective as she was able to escape through Marunomi's clutches. You really got her thoughts all into this session of the chapter good. Especially the way she was able to escape into one of Orochimaru's old hidden labs. I really can tell how cautious Anko's being while taking cover in said lab. So that said good job there and can't wait to see how things turn out for her.
All in all a good exciting chapter on this one and you really went all out on this one. I can't wait to see how it goes so go on and take your time with it, Nobodyman. Keep up the good work!
Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel
Posted by Urielzael2 7 years ago Report
I wonder, if both Tsunade and Sakura, which are heads of Medics in Leaf Village got absorbed, why Marunomi won't just make people of village think about that there is epidemic and got absorbing them 1 by 1 since she absorbed whole hospital.
Very nice chapter though, I'm sad that Tsunade fall for something such predictible like using her own student as bait.
Also one more thing, since Marunomis power are conecting to elasticy and devouring why didnt they placed cursed Mark as they did on Naruto in Blood Prison movie? This mark was so powerfull that it even make senjutsu chakra much weaker. Though it is not cannon so maybe you were right since it grants us such delightfull chapter.