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Vore Disposal Inc. sends a team to clean up some Mario Party fans. So this was a long time coming but finally felt like writing again. Hope it's somewhat enjoyable. I know it's somewhat long looking (but it's only because I can't fix the format) but be sure to read all of it so things make sense! If not it won't have full impact. Other than that, have any idea where VD should go next?
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Posted by Fischie 7 years ago Report
Nice story. I had to chew through the personal backgrounds and stuff a bit but I like the idea of that company and the suspensefull way the plant influenced them made the vore even better. Also laughed when they named the buckets.
Posted by Saphir 7 years ago Report
Yea sorry about that, I like adding stories and substance to stories, much to the readers distress. This one hasn't gotten much good feed back so I'll work on getting better about it. But thank you!
Posted by Fischie 7 years ago Report
I would not contort too much just because people would like it otherwise there would be nothing but anthro dragons made of tits and cocks eating anthro foxes. I like the idea you came up with and I am sure you can come up with an idea to make the background stuff feel more fluent and still make the reader feel attached to the chars.