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A psychologist centers her counseling practice around vore and relationships. She regularly leaves a trail of remains in her wake but playing with acids can get you turned into someone's ASSets.
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Another whopper of a story. Quite long, Novella length.
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Posted by Whereaminow27 7 years ago Report
That is what Jill gets. O_o....
Posted by ryanshowseason3 7 years ago Report
It is kind of a left field twist heh
Posted by ErRynArya 7 years ago Report
Alright. I'll admit, i honestly didnt see that plot twist coming but its a veey good one as ive always wondered what would the pred do if that happened lol
Posted by TrainerKatrine 7 years ago Report
The ending honestly made me laugh, it was hilarious.. xD
Posted by TrainerKatrine 7 years ago Report
And really good story, +1 from my side. :)
Posted by TrainerKatrine 7 years ago Report
My only minus though was the part where Jill used Juliana's face to wipe her booteh, but it kinda made sense to me the second time that I read it, since I hadn't found the part with the unbirth in it (I tend to scim through texts to see if it's worth reading. I noticed the unbirth tag, but had a lot of trouble finding it the second time. :p But when I found it, it kinda made sense in the part where Jill uses Juliana's face to wipe her bum) but either way, there you have my critique if it can be taken as that. Continue your lovely work and that is all from my part. :)
Posted by Sira 7 years ago Report
Loved it~
Posted by BardicLasher 7 years ago Report
Jill, you fool! You just earned Casual Friday and you've already sacrificed it!
Posted by Fabrja13 7 years ago Report
Honestly I would love to see some manips from this story