Posted by rabbidrabbid 6 years ago Report

You know what's sad? By even including a bit of X-Men here, this is still more attention than Marvel has been giving them.

I'm not going to rant or anything, but Marvel vs Capcom Infinite really needs Wolverine.

Still though, good story!

Posted by Naganommer 6 years ago Report

Thank you!
I haven't been paying attention to that game. Fighting games don't really capture my interest. Or really any video game for that matter.

Posted by Hereforvore 6 years ago Report

Well marvel no longer owns the XMen. Why do you think Fox is the one that makes the movies? Marvel sold the rights ages ago, the only reason they were able to keep quicksilver and scarlet witch is because technically they are avengers, which means both companies own the characters. Marvel under Disney isn't able to use Fantastic 4 or XMen, they don't own them anymore.

Posted by rabbidrabbid 6 years ago Report

Dude, I'm not talking about the movies. Did I mention the movies? Marvel owns the X-Men, so please do your research.

Fox owns the MOVIE rights to the X-Men. Not the video game rights or the comic rights.

Posted by Hereforvore 6 years ago Report

Geez man chill, I don't play the games so didn't know that, I was just sharing what knowledge I was aware of. :)

Posted by venomousdreams 6 years ago Report

Unfortunately Marvel has yet to make that distinction either. They seem to want to focus on characters that they can make movie money off of, seeing as the best selling comics still only sell about 200-300 issues nation-wide. They still see the comics as a way to sell movies, not the other way around. Keep in mind they did the same thing to Spider-man, giving him worse and worse stories simply because they were not seeing any money from his movies. It is only because they got his movie rights back that they started giving him good stories again. There have even been times when they have said that X-men and Spider-man stories were designed to "piss-off the fanbase" so that the interest would dwindle and they could sabotage their respective movie franchises. Fox is bleeding money, and you can be guarenteed if they start consistently putting out bad X-men movies they will have to sell the franchise back to Marvel and the editors and writers will begin to care again.

Posted by venomousdreams 6 years ago Report

This was amazing. I love that She-hulk got Spider-girl and MJ at the same time, and the dynamic between Rachel and Illyana was fantastic. Keep it up, it was well worth the wait!

Posted by Naganommer 6 years ago Report

Thank you. The whole reason I put Spider-girl in the story is because of the suggestion you made. It really made this chapter something unique.

Posted by venomousdreams 6 years ago Report

I agree, It's really something special. You know what would be interesting? Spider-girls story of being eaten. Was her bf forced to let her out or did he do it willingly? Could he just not digest her? Hell, what kind of relationship does she have with her mom back inn her time after this? Do they become vore sluts together?

Posted by Naganommer 6 years ago Report

Sorry to disappoint but I'm probably not going to expand on her experience. I'll leave it up to the reader to come up with their own story.

Posted by venomousdreams 6 years ago Report

No disappointment here. Though if you don't mid I might write it up.

Posted by Naganommer 6 years ago Report

Absolutely. If my work has inspired you then I'm more than happy to see you write it.

Posted by Psionicull 6 years ago Report

Naganommer, just popping in to say that I liked your stories and the use of superheroes as the characters. Actually I made this account specifically to say thanks. AVP has been great so far and like others I love the Mayday/MaryJane pairing. Them sharing a cramped one bedroom while Mary Jane makes passes at Mayday is the highlight of the story so far. If you want suggestions for new characters I have some assuming this is the right place to suggest them. Why not Mystique? She could easily have infiltrated the party from the start in the shapechanged form of an invited guest. Possibly with intent to see if she can sabotage the Scarlett Witches mass resurrection spell before it engages at the end of the party. That would create some background tension for your story. Or perhaps she just wanted to have some Vore fun and couldn't help but crash. Sue Storm could easily be caught as an invisible voyeur. waging an internal war in her mind between her inhibitions against vore and how much it turns her on until she's decides to introduce herself or is caught. I would suggest Jean Grey making an appearance and being with her daughter but you've already kinda did that. It would take some explaining as to why but Gamora from Guardians of the galaxy showing up would be interesting. This is a party, what about party games? Perhaps a key party style random selection? The Women that are willing but hesitant to become prey have to put their names in a bag and a lucky pred gets to draw a name(no backing out allowed) Vore poker? The woman who loses all their chips loses a lot more than money? Or perhaps the winner of vore poker is the one that gets to choose from the bag of prey names. The possibilities are endless.

Posted by Naganommer 6 years ago Report

Thank you for your suggestions and for creating a profile just to make them. (Super flattered by that.) I absolutely love your ideas and will do my best to implement them in a way that flows with the continuity of the story. You actually came in at exactly the right time because I was having trouble getting part 3 to work in a way that I liked, and a high stakes poker game is the perfect way to bring up the tension! Thank you so much for the ideas.

Posted by Moreno 6 years ago Report

Do a story where black widow eats every marvel character in a series please

Posted by Naganommer 6 years ago Report

Sorry but that's not really my thing.

Posted by Psionicull 6 years ago Report

You're totally welcome. If I had any other ideas it would be that you include Rogue. A young teenaged version of her going to the party believing she was immune from being eaten because of her power. I'm sure that between Scarlet Witch and the rest of the super powered party goers her draining powers can be suppressed just long enough (and unexpectedly)for her to become a meal. Her desire to be touched in any way would take over from there.

Posted by Naganommer 6 years ago Report

Sorry to disappoint but I won't be able to fit that in.

Posted by Psionicull 6 years ago Report

Hey thats just means fodder for later stories. I may even give it a whack myself. I'm not a bad writer myself. Are you ok with spinoffs/stuff set in your universe assuming I clear it with you first? You seemed to be from previous comments.

Posted by Naganommer 6 years ago Report

Absolutely! If my stories have inspired you then I encourage you act on that inspiration.

Posted by YummyLady 5 years ago Report

What happened to part 3?

Posted by Naganommer 5 years ago Report

(Sheepishly) I hid it because I was embarrassed and was going to retcon it. I'll put it back.

Posted by YummyLady 5 years ago Report

Thanks! I loved it!!! Btw is a part 4 in your plans?

Posted by Naganommer 5 years ago Report

I want to rewrite part three and then I'll do part four.

Posted by YummyLady 5 years ago Report

Why rewright it? Its perfect as is

Posted by Naganommer 5 years ago Report

I don't like it

Posted by YummyLady 5 years ago Report

Ok... but please keep the original up? I absolutely love it and I adore your writing

Posted by Naganommer 5 years ago Report

Definitely, I'll keep it up.

Posted by YummyLady 5 years ago Report

Thank you!