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I wanted to continue the story, but it took a long time for me to figure out just how I wanted to do it. I sincerely hope you like it!
You might want to download it. I can never figure out how to format it right on this site... :(
Part 1: https://aryion.com/g4/view/389298
All characters portrayed are 18 or over.
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Posted by Graywolf18 7 years ago Report
I really enjoyed the first one and am pleasantly surprised, and quite delighted, that it got a sequel.
Posted by DeltaRomeo 7 years ago Report
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
Posted by JustTroy 7 years ago Report
I absolutely loved this story! Your extensive use of the dirty talk, the obvious live between these two, the post-vore talk between the two, the real possibility of digestion, and the acceptance of that possibility were my favorite aspects. For that matter, this was very well written. I could spot very few grammatical errors or misspellings. Fantastic job!
Posted by DeltaRomeo 7 years ago Report
Thank you very much!
Posted by 157and493 7 years ago Report
Such a good story. I enjoy it when the predator is kind and loves her prey.
Posted by DeltaRomeo 7 years ago Report
Glad you liked it!
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 7 years ago Report
I'm glad I found this, it started good and got even better. Hope this gets another sequel (or two), because this is too good to not follow up on.
Posted by DeltaRomeo 7 years ago Report
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I do plan to continue this story when I get some free time.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 7 years ago Report
Yay! That rocks!