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We are ancient. We are alive. We are Esurient.
And we are hungry...
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Okay, now that this is coming up on nearly two weeks late, here's the full story! It shouldn't have taken nearly this long to get this part post; apparently, I need to do something to help me keep track of when I post a damn story.
Don't forget: It's all about the flavor. The delicious, unadulterated, emotional flavor.
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Posted by Graywolf18 6 years ago Report
Quite an interesting bit of writing. Normally I don't like it when people skimp on the details when it comes to the vore but I didn't mind it so much with this one. Leaving out the details reveals just how swift the act was and how unimportant it was. Like eating a potato chip or something just as menial.
Posted by CurioHeart 6 years ago Report
I'm glad that was conveyed effectively! It was kind of a challenge to get it right, but I'm glad it did.
Posted by mojo-2131285 6 years ago Report
Very nice. Not enough vore from the 1st person perspective.
Posted by CurioHeart 6 years ago Report
Especially not first person plural! I can't say I'm surprised, though, since this particular form of plurality had a lot of really weird challenges for perspective.