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A 3 and a half page story I wrote for the fun of it, trying to get back into drawing, but till then, ill be working on short and long stories for a bit. (updated)
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Posted by Mondeur 6 years ago Report
Nice to see you're writing again. Can't wait for part 2!
Posted by GeneralUrist 6 years ago Report
The premise is pretty cool, but honestly it was very hard to read. I mean, HOLY MOTHER OF RUN ON SENTENCES! You need to be much less conservative with full stops.
Posted by IEatYouWhole 6 years ago Report
meh, I read it fine, plus it was better set out on word than on here :P it all smushed together :P