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A story I have been working on about a girl named Helen on a trip to a theme park, where things don't go as planned.
my grammar sucks I know and I can't make it look the way I want so if it looks like a large mass of text, I apologies cause i haven't figured out how to fix that :P Also i came up with the name on the spot so don't hate me for it XD
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Posted by ivyiblack 7 years ago Report
I like it
Posted by IEatYouWhole 7 years ago Report
yay ^^
Posted by Mechdragon1k 7 years ago Report
Me too. It is a interesting idea.
Posted by IEatYouWhole 7 years ago Report
glad you like it ^^
Posted by Apostolos 7 years ago Report
Nicely done, judging by the name there will be more, yes?
Posted by IEatYouWhole 7 years ago Report
yep, will be a part 2, though first gotta decide on what direction i want part 2 to take, not want to just dive in XD
Posted by Apostolos 7 years ago Report
Well I guess someone or something has to feed the snake in there, maybe during some physical training activity she accidentally lets part of him out before she notices and he snags a bitchy meal before she pulls him back in?
Posted by dabbydabber 7 years ago Report
A-Okay
Posted by IEatYouWhole 7 years ago Report
wow XD hmm, who knows, maybe :3
Posted by Jayezox 7 years ago Report
I enjoyed it
Posted by AndAnotherOne 7 years ago Report
Was wondering where the unbirth was lol. This was a good read, wonder if that is what it would actually feel like in real life. Not gonna go out of my way to try though, I would die.
Posted by IEatYouWhole 7 years ago Report
XD ye sorry its kinda at the end :P and I have no idea if thats how it is in real life XD but I am sure anyone would die just attempting to swallow a 25ft long snake XD
Posted by AndAnotherOne 7 years ago Report
Indeed, pretty sure they would. They would still probably die even if it was maybe 3 feet. Sure they could live through swallowing it whole, but the snake could cause something to tear from the inside while in their stomach, which could lead to hospitalization if you haven't already internally bled to death. I think that it would be entirely possible without risk of death if it was an incredibly obese person swallowing the snake whole, since they'll just be so big.
Posted by IEatYouWhole 7 years ago Report
I don;t think being obese has anything to do with it :P but maybe if the person had expanded their stomach enough through training for an eating contest year after year, then maybe they could with a smaller snake, otherwise then even if obese i'm not sure their stomach expands the same way :P
Posted by AndAnotherOne 7 years ago Report
Possibly. I only did mention obese because I've only seen one guy at a buffet that was and there were 12 plates around him, and he had a table to himself.
Posted by IEatYouWhole 7 years ago Report
oh, okay, sorry i guess i kinda jumped the gun XD i guess there are some people like that too ^^
Posted by Zavvnao 7 years ago Report
is the snake okay in there? X3
Posted by IEatYouWhole 7 years ago Report
depends on how I continue the story :3 though atm kinda on hiatus cause not sure what to do :P