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A perhaps far more twisted, but fun version of an alternate reality where things didn't pan out so well for the known hero within his first time about the city walls
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Art purchased from exoship of Deviant Art.
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Posted by 157and493 7 years ago Report
This was... unusual.
It took a really long time to get to the vore part, I can understand the appeal of buildup, but it felt like you were actually trying to write a long story.
Also, it feels like you were trying to make a poetic point, but it was probably my own fault that I did not get it.
Finally, (and this is just personal preference) but I would have preferred more burping.
Posted by joeburp22181 7 years ago Report
Heh. Alright. Thanks for your feedback. It's appreciated!
Posted by KarmaticF8 7 years ago Report
Loved it, there isn’t much AgK Vore content on here.
Keep up the good work.
Posted by joeburp22181 7 years ago Report
Thanks a lot for the positive feedback! It was fun to create.
Posted by derpyspacewhale 7 years ago Report
Love to see more agk stuff :)
Posted by dragonvenom 7 years ago Report
This is by far one of the best vore stories ive ever read dude. 10 out 10 and i seriously dont think ive given that to even 2 stories
Posted by joeburp22181 7 years ago Report
Ah. Thank you very much! It was fun to write.