Posted by Groblek 7 years ago Report

Ooh, interesting!

Posted by dreamweevil 7 years ago Report

Glad you think so! I wasn't sure this was heading anywhere promising, but that inspired me to take a different angle on it that I've never done before (especially part 2).

Posted by nick222238 5 years ago Report

Disappointed that I couldn't see the Deirdre digestion ending.
But good story anyway.

Posted by dreamweevil 4 years ago Report

Thanks! Actually, you're going to get to, almost coincidentally. I decided to do one more story arc in this universe and am curious (as always) what elements people would find interesting (if any)...

Tom and Melanie, having spent several "lifetimes" together, finally get married in real life; on their honeymoon, Tom's astute enough to notice that something seems a little off in his new spouse.

While Melanie loves Tom dearly and is happy to be married to him, she realizes that she still has a thing for Heather, the character Tom played so well early on. Tom's more than willing to indulge his new wife's fantasy, of course, but Melanie begs him to reconsider; her fantasy is that of spending an entire lifetime with Heather, and making Heather more "real" than she was before, and she worries that doing so will change Tom's personality.

Tom insists anyway, wanting to please his wife (and he enjoys playing Heather). Ultimately Melanie sends him back to the locker room, where the women use a little dark, messy, feminine magic to kick off the process by which Deirdre will unbirth him, just as she'd offered to do so much earlier. She is to become Heather's mother in this next life, with the only guarantee being that, at some point, Heather and Melanie will meet.

Sound worth reading? And any topics that I should avoid or pay extra attention to?