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Hey everybody!
Two things.
One: i liked to thank Vmaster608 for offering to spend their time to make some corrections to some of my stories that they did to make it sound better.
And two: the reason why I'm uploading this again is because my re-upload is only producing the same pre-corrected version so if you see the same thing again, you know the reason.
Thanks for all the support and I'll talk to you about more stuff later.
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Posted by venomousdreams 7 years ago Report
Feels... Rushed. Good, but rushed. Very little detail.
Posted by Personad 7 years ago Report
Sorry I couldn't put in more details. I will try to be more descriptive with the next one.
Posted by darklord42 7 years ago Report
remember my idea and hell have Amber join the family and maybe give cathy kids and cathy can eat them when ever she wants
Posted by Personad 7 years ago Report
Don't worry I will
Just have to wait until after I finish with Cheerleaders.
Posted by darklord42 7 years ago Report
Ok and hell add Amber's family as well and maybe all will have a child from Cathy and she can eat them and keep them alive when ever she wants
Posted by Personad 7 years ago Report
All I could thinks about if someone draws this out and seeing how big Cathy will be.
But thanks for the ideas, I'll add them to the list of what I will do for this month.
Posted by darklord42 7 years ago Report
Ok thank you
Posted by darklord42 7 years ago Report
Hell it would be nice to see that family get bigger
Posted by Personad 7 years ago Report
You are a very ambitious person who loves things that will make a person's belly bigger.
Clearly you have good tastes.
Posted by darklord42 7 years ago Report
Thank you hell making her mother sisters her neighboers and amber and her family pregnant would fill cathy up very much
Posted by Personad 7 years ago Report
I'm going to have to save your's when thanksgiving comes up cause Cathy is going to be stuffed.
Posted by darklord42 7 years ago Report
Yeah and Cathy will get them all pregnant some how
Posted by Personad 7 years ago Report
A possibility for either a scientific accident occurring.
Or having them in her womb.
Speaking of which, wanna introduce Unbirth in this or no?
Posted by darklord42 7 years ago Report
Maybe because she has to get them pregnant and eat them with out digesting them
Posted by Personad 7 years ago Report
True. Alright screw it I'll add Unbirth to this
Im a huge Unbirth fan anyways
Posted by darklord42 7 years ago Report
But cathy will still give the women her children
Posted by Personad 7 years ago Report
Alright, alot to take in.
Hey think you can describe how you want the sequel to play out?
Like when does someone gets eaten first, and then who gets unbirthed so I can start planning an outline?
Posted by darklord42 7 years ago Report
I would say Cathy's mother unbirthed and her neighbors mother eaten first and she will not get pregnant with her mother in her womb but she can get her other women pregnant
Posted by Personad 7 years ago Report
Oh ok
Tomorrow I will send you a message about an outline I have for it.
But for now, I need to work on the cheerleader smorgasbord.
Posted by darklord42 7 years ago Report
Ok and I can't wait and how about cathy can get women pregnant when they are in her womb
Posted by darklord42 7 years ago Report
or how ever
Posted by Personad 7 years ago Report
Alright.
I like your style
Posted by darklord42 7 years ago Report
thanks
Posted by darklord42 7 years ago Report
and cathy keeps all prediators not in the family away from hers