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This is the fourth story of Zōēā, wild elf of the jungles and rain forests of the Velnēs, veldami (green-witch) and shāhēn (snake-woman). The first three stories are as follows, in this order:

"Food Chained"
"Talk to the Animals"
"Homecoming"

These stories can be located in this folder:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/425608

This new story also begins a new arc for Zōēā, introducing a particularly unpleasant creature, as suggested by the title. The vore is a bit lighter here—again, the needs of the story arc require this. Still, I hope that those who enjoyed her first three stories will enjoy the fourth. And fifth. And sixth. And seventh…

I'll shut up now.

Updated 4/30/2019 to correct two typographical errors.

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Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 7 years ago Report

Great story. Perhaps the dragon can force the elf to dive for treasure.

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Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 7 years ago Report

Is there a edit button on this site.
Edit the treasure dumped.

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IvesBentonEaton

Posted by IvesBentonEaton 7 years ago Report

Not sure what you meant by this, but the only way for a shout to be edited is to delete it and redo it, as far as I've seen. Oh, and I'm glad you like the story. :)

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IvesBentonEaton

Posted by IvesBentonEaton 7 years ago Report

Actually, the next two stories are written, and part of the one after that, things will be a bit busy for everyone. :P

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IddlerItaler

Posted by IddlerItaler 11 months ago Report

"Once there was a tribe of humans in Elyzhar who worshiped him, which he found rather proper. After all, he was mighty like a god, and his zealots understood their place in the world as prey. They had, over the years, brought him much treasure and comestible sacrifices."

It only makes sense, I suppose. Some people are really into snakes and being eaten by them, others must feel the same for dragons. Shame about the genocide though.

Speaking of... Ouch. Whoever took away the Ocelot tribe probably wasn't this dragon, due to the line about not having tasted elf in a while.

"And if he fell—well, the main vent had partially collapsed after the magma chamber had emptied a millennium or more ago, and the dragon had kicked more rock into it. The hapless climber would not fall into lava.

What he would fall into would be much, much worse."

Oh me, oh my.

"He imagined his victims now mocking him, daring him to dive into their noxious remains to find his scattered treasure, to pull him down and suffocate him in their putrid grasp. “Come,” they seemed to hiss from the bubbling cesspool. “Join us. Become one of us. Become one with us-s-s.”"

Oh, talk about karma. I'd say it's a delicious vengeance but, you know.

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