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Leona and her Valkyries go to war. Sadly for her enemies, she leaves no prisoners.
Inspired by https://mavezar.deviantart.com/art/Leona-Valkyrie-669151247
Just something fun in an attempt to fit as much vore in as possible, while still somewhat making sense.
Let me know what you think!
Edit: I don't know how to make it get rid of the wall-of-texty feel. I even went back and double spaced all the lines.
Open Office makes the writing tiny, no matter what size and pick and downloading it from google docs as a .docx file won't put the spaces I want in it :(
Edit 2: Aha! Thanks to https://aryion.com/g4/user/hungrydumpty for fixing the formatting!
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Posted by Personad 6 years ago Report
Looks perfect to me.
And thank the gods that I was blessed to read such a great story!
And I do like how Leona is able to hold more than everyone else and not show it.
Posted by HungryAL 6 years ago Report
Thanks for the praise! I guess i couod have done worse in formatting sense, but i still would have prefferred more space...
Yeah, bulgeless is a favourite of mine. The more you squeeze in without showing the better :P
Posted by hungrydumpty 6 years ago Report
Just wanted to say thanks for the shout out.
I loved how you did the actual fight, it was really detailed and interesting.
Posted by HungryAL 6 years ago Report
Hey, no problem. It was the least I could do.
Glad you enjoyed it. Was more going for quantity over detail (end still feels a bit rushed to me) but if it ended up detailed as well, that's only a plus, right?
Posted by hungrydumpty 6 years ago Report
Right!
Posted by Kurczak48 6 years ago Report
Nice, I like it! Scenes were really fast though, but that gave the story very dynamic action.
Posted by HungryAL 6 years ago Report
Well that's good to hear that the speed didn't detract from it. As much as I'd like Leona to savour her meals, it just wouldn't be viable when someone is coming at her with a sword :P
Glad you liked it!