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After watching Medaka Box I've got inspired to write something about this anime, especially because of lack of content around it.(And it has such a nice artstyle, not mentioning Medaka's curves.)
It's my first time making a story, I am aware of flaws it has, but I have troubles tracking them down.
Belly version was also on my mind but I didn't want to overdo it.
I want to get better at this kind of art to make stories more interesting, and most importantly, to give love to all the series that are worth it, but aren't given enough attention.
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Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 6 years ago Report
Oh hey, someone wrote a Medaka Box story before I got around to writing one up. And it doesn't Medaka being prey, even better. By the way, you might want to do something about that "Kaminari Medaka" line in the very first line, because I'm very certain that's a typo.
Posted by Kurczak48 6 years ago Report
Haha, got it before you! I know there is quite a lot of pred material so I wouldn't be surprised with opposite works.
Right, I've overseen this, honest thanks!
Posted by teabender 6 years ago Report
Though I haven't heard of this anime before, then I think you did an excellent job setting the scene and conveying the story. Loved it!
Posted by Kurczak48 6 years ago Report
Thankies~!
I knew a little about that the series might not be known, so I wanted to focus on giving a clear view how predator looks.
Posted by algog8 6 years ago Report
eat the rest of the school!
Posted by Kurczak48 6 years ago Report
Who knows...I have some ideas, though with characters other than Medaka alone. She would be the last woman standing for sure~
Posted by algog8 6 years ago Report
Then the rest of the world?
Posted by Kurczak48 6 years ago Report
Haha, certainly!
I'll cross fingers for now, until I'm sure about it. ^^
Posted by algog8 6 years ago Report
What if she goes on a rampage in all the other fictional universes to see of anyone could challenge her stomach?
Posted by HungryAL 6 years ago Report
Oh fun! Its been a while since ive seen Medaka Box, so needed a refresher on who Shiranui was, but it was well written and even a vore style I'm rather fond of.
Might go watch Medaka Box again sometime thanks to this. I loved that fight with the guy that kept pulling guns out of nowhere.
Posted by Kurczak48 6 years ago Report
Thank you aand...
...High five! It's one of hidden gems nowadays. :P
I think it's Kei on your mind~
Shiranui is forgettable because she gets important much later than anime reaches.
Posted by HungryAL 6 years ago Report
Well I'm glad you made her important earlier in your version (As fat on Medaka's bust and hips!)
Posted by Kurczak48 6 years ago Report
*Shiranui promoted to Main Character*
Posted by PanD109 3 years ago Report
Nice story, but very short.
(To pytanie musi się pojawić, czy ty jesteś może z Polski, skoro masz "Kurczak" w nicku?)
Posted by Kurczak48 3 years ago Report
I was thinking about longer story made of short chapters like that, but I wanted to give a try with separate povs.
And about the question. Yes ^^
Posted by PanD109 3 years ago Report
Miło spotkać rodaka w tak uroczym miejscu.
Zawsze ma się od tego lepszy humor.
Posted by Kurczak48 3 years ago Report
Zaskakująco uprzejma odpowiedź, hihi. Acz prawda, niewielu polaków spotyka się..
Posted by quillanlockard 2 years ago Report
Can you do hansode's revenge please