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Part 5: Taming the Wild Stallion By dreamweevil -- Report

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Melanie would like to know what it's like to be a man. Tom obliges, demonstrating that he's a quick learner by giving her that lesson in a way she didn't expect. Caution: scat.

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Groblek

Posted by Groblek 6 years ago Report

Ooh, vey nice! Tom turns the tables on Mel very well in this one. And I really like the way Heather decided to end the scenario.

dreamweevil

Posted by dreamweevil 6 years ago Report

Thanks! He learned Melanie's trick about keeping the other person a little bit off guard. He wanted the end to be sexy, and Melanie had already given him a clue as to something she liked.

knifesmile

Posted by knifesmile 6 years ago Report

Why would the hair not grow as long? Men's hair isn't naturally shorter. It's a cultural thing to cut men's hair shorter. I don't know why that little detail bugged me but it did. I really like the ideas in this, though, the shared created pseudo reality and all.

dreamweevil

Posted by dreamweevil 6 years ago Report

That factoid is real. If a man never cuts his hair, he can grow it to the middle of his back or so. Many women could grow their hair to their knees if they wanted to. Individual hair follicles have periodic resting phases during which the hair is shed before a new hair starts growing; that limits the overall length of your hair. Men, due to testosterone, have shorter cycles than women do, and therefore shorter hair.

Glad you liked the concept! Not sure exactly where I'm taking this and have to do some experimentation with it.