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Dominatrix Tigress - Commission for NiceGuy18 By Zeeza -- Report

Thanks go to the wonderful  NiceGuy18 for their unexpected yet wonderful contribution! They requested a POV experience versus a very hungry Dominatrix Tigress, and I was more than willing to oblige!

Because I had to look up the definition myself, here's the definition of Dominatrix: "a dominating woman, especially one who takes the sadistic role in sadomasochistic sexual activities." ~Google

Once again, thanks go to  NiceGuy18 for this wonderful opportunity!

Don't forget, you can either commission from me or sign up at https://www.patreon.com/auratierdreemurr for monthly rewards such as these!

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Zeeza: Don't be afraid to tell me what you thought about this pic! Honestly love answering comments and looking through them!
Fire away!

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MirceaKitsune

Posted by MirceaKitsune 7 years ago Report

Her belly please <3

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Zeeza

Posted by Zeeza 7 years ago Report

It's a really tempting offer either way!
~...murr...~

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Achilles

Posted by Achilles 7 years ago Report

I submit! :D

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hibbyjibby

Posted by hibbyjibby 7 years ago Report

Well, I'm definitely all for femdom, AND with a latex dominatrix adding to it. It just makes it for some extra icing on the proverbial cake. Yah didn't know what 'dominatrix' meant? Well that's kinda surprising, to me atleast. My favorites and works should showcase that, hah.


I will say though, her shoulders are quite, wide. I am aware she's probably supposed to be leaning forward, which sorta does that to shoulders. But it's not very clear given where the POV is, and the female prey's breasts. The dom's legs as well, a bit unusual to position them that way. Uncomfortable I'd say. Making em go the other way, outward instead of inward to imply she's sitting on her prey, I think would've shown off her low body a bit more, and seem a bit more natural.

Oh, and her text is a little hard to see when it's a light, desaturated orange mixed with a white border. I can still read it, but I do gotta make the effort.


Still, it's not a -bad- picture of course. But, someone's gotta mention the concerns and negatives, right?

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Zeeza

Posted by Zeeza 7 years ago Report

Thanks for the critique! This is the first time i really went for this perspective in this regard, so i expected to get some stuff wrong.

For the pose critique, i thank you a ton! I'm pretty bad right now when it comes to guessing poses, and the hands and proportions of the body parts (like the shoulders) always seem to be off.

For the text, i ended up doing it last, when i was messing with it and was also really tired at the same time. If i could do it again, i would add a darker color border with a thinner width.

Thank you again for your time, and i hope to hear from you in the future :D

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hibbyjibby

Posted by hibbyjibby 7 years ago Report

Anytime, now. I have fairly trained eyes so, I might as well offer critiques eh?

If you feel your proportions need work, look up how long things tend to be on a human, or atleast humanoid body. Little general rules like upper and forearms are about the same length, eyes far enough to fit a third one inbetween, thighs are around the same length as the torso, etc. And men and women are different with other things too, so that's worth practicing too.

Ahh, I see. Well hey, can't be at 11/10 all the time right? If you're ever tired when doing art, probably better to put it away for awhile and come back later. Hindsight is 20/20, and it isn't a big deal here, but something to remember.


Long as you keep makin' pictures, I'll keep critiquin' em.

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Zeeza

Posted by Zeeza 7 years ago Report

Thank you :)

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