Posted by Ixtili 7 years ago Report

Huh...that was bizarrely sexual and invested for a Felaryan predator. Aren't they usually more asexual and impersonal?

Not that I'm complaining but I haven't really seen it before. For that setting.

Posted by jack27 7 years ago Report

You are right. I even point that out at one point, where Sylvi thinks about how the other fairies find her tendencies disconcerting.

But there are a couple of hyper-sexual Felaryan preds... Vivian certainly comes to mind ;)

Posted by Ixtili 7 years ago Report

True though I can't imagine those preds using telepathy to comfort their prey. Hence why I also said it seemed more personal. Sylvi came across like she was actually a voreophile herself rather than just unwittingly supplying fetish fuel for the observer. She's also enjoying the fetish and as time goes on so is her snack.

That's another thing I don't often see in Felarya: prey that comes to enjoy their fate.

Posted by jack27 7 years ago Report

You are right about all those things. I did write this with that sort of idea in mind. That Sylvi enjoyed vore as a fetish basically...

And yeah it is different then other Felaryan stories. That is true. I was a bit worried how it would be received due to that. But I posted it on DA first. And Karbo himself enjoyed it. So I was happy about that ^^

I do hope to write more about this character at some stage...

Posted by Karbo 7 years ago Report

Oh this is a great story ! I really enjoyed the teasing here :D great job ^_^

Posted by jack27 7 years ago Report

Thank you so much Karbo ^^ I'm glad you liked it. Especially the teasing haha, that's always important.

I've been a fan of your work for quite awhile now. It is quite a vidid world you have created. And it has been a joy to watch it develop over time. Your drawings are supurb. I really could go on forever xD