Oho, possible theory:
Rika realises that Sora is going to start obsessing over becoming prey, so to save her daughter and make her change her mind/path, she'll try to make her a predator! Which leads to her offering herself to her own daughter as a meal for her birthday!
Been following this story since the beginning, and as much as i like this, i am just a little disapppointed that the vore sence seem to be shorter and end too quickly compared to the earlier parts of the story...
I want Sora to be come a lees then eat her “sisters” and although I don’t think it will happen I want Sora to fight Melinda for house pred dominisnce. Love you work nastu
Im gonna be honest, looking at this second chapter... i kind of feel insulted. Thks entire chapter is one big fap bait! The first story had at leasthad a sense of elegance to its story, and ended with some uplifting messages about the in world vore and a true promise between the characters. This entire chapter undermines and spits on that first chapter. Why save Rika and Sora just to eat Sora, and no, her "being prey" isnt a good enough explanation. Why tell Midorishe wasn't raising her own food WHEN SHE PRETTY MUCH DID EXACTLY THAT?!
I get that these are your characters and you can do with them as you seem fit. But this series just spiralled down into a jumbled mess of untied plot points for the sex bits, which honest to god werent anywhere close to the level of the first chapter.
I love these characters and this world. I really truly do. The first story, Rika's Introduction to Vore, was phenominal. It really was. But this second chapter just... made me sad to see that practically EVERYTHING the characterslearned in the first one was wiped clean. It felt insulting. And i truly dont think i can continue to read this series. Not if it keeps going this direction. t just feels like you stopped trying to make a decent story to make fap bait.
Gotta agree it's kind of all over the place... I absolutely adore how Natsu depicts vore scenes, but this was a bit hard to enjoy indeed :T My faves fom him remain his Naruto eating contest commissions...
That said, he doesn't mind drawing female pred vore, but I think what he really enjoys is plant vore (female prey) (I believe he stated so), so it comes kind of unsurprising to me that I enjoy his commissions better than the content he writes himself. Although I do love his sense of comedic writing!
So you know, just feels logical that I prefer when someone who shares my tastes much more closely, writes the 'sexy'. That said it still feels pretty conflicting with how part one ends indeed. Been a while I seen all that, but my memories seem to match your summary.
Yeah I completely agree. The whole idea of Melenda requiring her meals to be in love with her has gone completely out the window and the whole notion of "Its more than pleasure" is just gone. It also doesn't make sense to introduce a character like Sora just to have her vanish so quickly. I'm sort of hoping chapter three gets back on track, and back to the sense of "new prey exploring vore". However I will say in Natsume's defense that he has been sick,overworked and plagued with problems while drawing up this chapter, but he still put out the promised pages every month (on patreon anyways) so perhaps that is why it felt a bit rushed and empty? I'd stick with it til chapter three and see what happens.
Everyone seems to be forgetting that Melinda didnt want to digest rika so she wouldnt "raise 3 babies on my own" which seems pretty selfish to me so lets not put her on a pedestal. Seems the majority of people here are just hating on this without constructive criticism. Just do what you want Natsu and dont listen to the plain hate.
Heres a thought wasnt Rika in the same predicament Sora was in not to long ago and changed her mind? Do we know for sure where this is leading? NO so lets not lose are marbles and let Natsu do her thing.
Seriously though, I genuinely want to see Midori put that cock of hers to use in her meals, maybe slurp up a few girls or maybe even that training snake like a spaghetti noodle~. That would be so fucking hot!
O nice this story apeers 2 b continued from wer I found it like 2 years ago on deviantart, back then it was the end of risk as intro to vore and I jus kinda assumed that was the end of it. Gr8 work and gr8 2 c it continued. (Up until 2 months ago)
Posted by Zego21 7 years ago Report
someone's got anger issues
Posted by MrNobody 7 years ago Report
Well, she didn't get digested when SHE wanted to, so...
Posted by anema_sesuna 7 years ago Report
Sex on command. Impressive
Posted by vorephilos 7 years ago Report
So that its realistically to digest . I thought she'd be a predator.(
Posted by NerdyNeko 7 years ago Report
Love Rikas reation...
"I'M ANGRY! SOMEONE FUCK ME RIGHT NOW!"
Posted by starfighter101 7 years ago Report
stress relief sex is sometimes the best sex it seems. x3
Posted by Xb46 7 years ago Report
I am laugh so hard to this
Posted by twistednuke 7 years ago Report
hahaha love it.
Posted by Cerberus194 7 years ago Report
natsu how can you overcome each drawing? in sincerity you are the best designer I have ever seen.
Posted by HungryHydra69 7 years ago Report
End of chapter already?
Posted by heli572 7 years ago Report
Wait... When did Midori get out?
Posted by Pakos 7 years ago Report
Oho, possible theory:
Rika realises that Sora is going to start obsessing over becoming prey, so to save her daughter and make her change her mind/path, she'll try to make her a predator! Which leads to her offering herself to her own daughter as a meal for her birthday!
Posted by Novapyro 7 years ago Report
Interesting, and an outcome I'd enjoy.
Posted by royalwerewolf 7 years ago Report
Just like that one pic natsu drew for sora's 18th birthday before this was made, remember that?
Posted by Novapyro 7 years ago Report
Yeah, Rika's never gonna go for that. Still, I have feeling Sora's gonna do it anyway.
Posted by RubytheWitch20 7 years ago Report
Hehe, or maybe Rika lures in a whole group of girls into the naga's place for a orgy/vorgy.
Making the snake soo full that she cant eat her daughter~
Posted by deletb96b1268 7 years ago Report
Mmmh, what a birthday present xD
Posted by JohnnyF102 7 years ago Report
ooh noice love it
Posted by ErRynArya 7 years ago Report
Digest that sweet little pinkette into body fat and then find a way to turn Rika into a baby making factory for feeding Melinda endlessly
Posted by darklord42 7 years ago Report
Yeah why is the mother not a pred yet
Posted by JohnnyF102 7 years ago Report
this is my favorite vore comic
Posted by shnuff 7 years ago Report
Been following this story since the beginning, and as much as i like this, i am just a little disapppointed that the vore sence seem to be shorter and end too quickly compared to the earlier parts of the story...
Posted by Kelly 7 years ago Report
Uii chapter 2 is over allready cant wait to see if she will be digested in chapter 3 for real ~
Posted by jackbluesun 7 years ago Report
agree
Posted by moonlightshy 7 years ago Report
welp. this is dead to me.
Posted by Drazelleverse 7 years ago Report
Hate to say it, i kind of agree here.
Posted by Xb46 7 years ago Report
I want Sora to be come a lees then eat her “sisters” and although I don’t think it will happen I want Sora to fight Melinda for house pred dominisnce. Love you work nastu
Posted by Xb46 7 years ago Report
Pred not less
Posted by Drazelleverse 7 years ago Report
Im gonna be honest, looking at this second chapter... i kind of feel insulted. Thks entire chapter is one big fap bait! The first story had at leasthad a sense of elegance to its story, and ended with some uplifting messages about the in world vore and a true promise between the characters. This entire chapter undermines and spits on that first chapter. Why save Rika and Sora just to eat Sora, and no, her "being prey" isnt a good enough explanation. Why tell Midorishe wasn't raising her own food WHEN SHE PRETTY MUCH DID EXACTLY THAT?!
I get that these are your characters and you can do with them as you seem fit. But this series just spiralled down into a jumbled mess of untied plot points for the sex bits, which honest to god werent anywhere close to the level of the first chapter.
I love these characters and this world. I really truly do. The first story, Rika's Introduction to Vore, was phenominal. It really was. But this second chapter just... made me sad to see that practically EVERYTHING the characterslearned in the first one was wiped clean. It felt insulting. And i truly dont think i can continue to read this series. Not if it keeps going this direction. t just feels like you stopped trying to make a decent story to make fap bait.
Posted by Debolte 7 years ago Report
Gotta agree it's kind of all over the place... I absolutely adore how Natsu depicts vore scenes, but this was a bit hard to enjoy indeed :T My faves fom him remain his Naruto eating contest commissions...
That said, he doesn't mind drawing female pred vore, but I think what he really enjoys is plant vore (female prey) (I believe he stated so), so it comes kind of unsurprising to me that I enjoy his commissions better than the content he writes himself. Although I do love his sense of comedic writing!
So you know, just feels logical that I prefer when someone who shares my tastes much more closely, writes the 'sexy'. That said it still feels pretty conflicting with how part one ends indeed. Been a while I seen all that, but my memories seem to match your summary.
Posted by jennyD 7 years ago Report
Yeah I completely agree. The whole idea of Melenda requiring her meals to be in love with her has gone completely out the window and the whole notion of "Its more than pleasure" is just gone. It also doesn't make sense to introduce a character like Sora just to have her vanish so quickly. I'm sort of hoping chapter three gets back on track, and back to the sense of "new prey exploring vore". However I will say in Natsume's defense that he has been sick,overworked and plagued with problems while drawing up this chapter, but he still put out the promised pages every month (on patreon anyways) so perhaps that is why it felt a bit rushed and empty? I'd stick with it til chapter three and see what happens.
Posted by dvex 7 years ago Report
Everyone seems to be forgetting that Melinda didnt want to digest rika so she wouldnt "raise 3 babies on my own" which seems pretty selfish to me so lets not put her on a pedestal. Seems the majority of people here are just hating on this without constructive criticism. Just do what you want Natsu and dont listen to the plain hate.
Posted by dvex 7 years ago Report
Heres a thought wasnt Rika in the same predicament Sora was in not to long ago and changed her mind? Do we know for sure where this is leading? NO so lets not lose are marbles and let Natsu do her thing.
Posted by GassyBlossom31 7 years ago Report
Midori reminds me of Leone from Akame Ga Kiru
Posted by RiderKick78 7 years ago Report
Thus ends another wonderful chapter.
Posted by RubytheWitch20 6 years ago Report
Hehe, like would it not be hot if Sora vored a bunch of cheer leaders or a all female family?
Posted by IsistheKitsune 7 years ago Report
Chapter 2 over already. Wow. Quite the developments.
Posted by pokebreeder25 7 years ago Report
i honestly want sora to become a preditor
Posted by MuseOfMilo 6 years ago Report
Seriously though, I genuinely want to see Midori put that cock of hers to use in her meals, maybe slurp up a few girls or maybe even that training snake like a spaghetti noodle~. That would be so fucking hot!
Posted by KeegsBruH413 6 years ago Report
The way I read that beastiality seemed 2 b implied and thas not ok thx
Posted by KeegsBruH413 6 years ago Report
O nice this story apeers 2 b continued from wer I found it like 2 years ago on deviantart, back then it was the end of risk as intro to vore and I jus kinda assumed that was the end of it. Gr8 work and gr8 2 c it continued. (Up until 2 months ago)
Posted by darklord42 6 years ago Report
I think the mother Might be a unknown pred
Posted by heli572 6 years ago Report
Hey, check this out:
https://e-hentai.org/s/0b4b7f8353/1231649-1
Posted by RubytheWitch20 6 years ago Report
Hehe, I wonder if those little girls are fed to the wolfy girl~
Hehe and their moms come by to join in~
Posted by heli572 6 years ago Report
Well, the chapter is called "The Vore Club" :)
Posted by RubytheWitch20 6 years ago Report
Hehe, oh will the club survive for long~
Hehe I love fatal vore~
Posted by RubytheWitch20 6 years ago Report
OH OH, maybe those girls go back to school and tell their friends about this den of preds and a number of girls come walking in for sex and vore~
Posted by cmanodie 6 years ago Report
I can not wait to see where you take this next. You always keep me on my toes with how great your talents are
Posted by RubytheWitch20 6 years ago Report
When will the next two pages come up?
Posted by WhiteShadow1 2 years ago Report
Honestly, I REALLY hope Melinda fails.