It's certainly much scarier despite how simple
it looks. I do realize it sorta looks like Laughing Jack but I think it looks different enough from Laughing Jack since well he doesn't have mouth where is stomach should be.
Plus, I'm guessing that Laughing Jack might be an inspiration for your character. Just be careful that it doesn't look too much like Jack. Also, is your character female, male, or are they genderless? I'm assuming its female from the pigtails but I thought I'd ask first.
Now, while this looks great, it's still flat but not as much as your slender man picture. Around the chest waist area, there's a bit more volume to it.
As for everything else, well, some of the lines aren't connected, never leave broken lines like that unless there's a good reason for it. And some lines are overlapping, it makes it look a bit sloppy.
The stripes are also not wrapping around parts of the body like they should.
The arms should be a little thicker, they're a little too thin and out of place to the rest of the body. Plus, why is he or she sticking their hands inside the chest mouth? Almost looks like their hiding their hands.
Lastly, I am a little concern the way you frame your characters in the image, by which I mean having them posed frontways. I would recommend trying more dynamic poses because it can get kinda boring and repetitive. Basically, try mixing it up.
& mettra is a girl :3 she was actually created by slender man or should i say she was once human but got killed & turned into a monster by slender man as his aplrentice :3
Ah I see. I'm not too familiar with the Slender Man lore besides just stuff from Marble Hornets or Creepypastas. Mine if I ask some questions about your character?
Mettra has no weaknesses she simply can shape shift into anything & vore anything im thinking of making a drawing of mettra where she vores all of outer space it self i know that sounds ridiculous but i dont care lol :3
Its not really ridiculous, this is vore we're talking about. Ridiculous left the building when someone half your size can just swallow you whole with ease, this is normal.
I've seen way too many comics or images of characters devouring the universe. If that's what you want to do, go for it and have fun. ^^
Also, just one more question. If Mettra has no weaknesses and can shape shift into anything and eat anything...how is she Slender Man's apprentice? Sounds like Slender Man over stepped his boundaries and created someone more powerful than him. Mettra is literally his master now! XD
Posted by Mettra 7 years ago Report
I look a little bit like laughing jack lol :3
Posted by SarahTheCuteVixen 7 years ago Report
what kind of old school cartoon monster is this?
Posted by Mettra 7 years ago Report
Urs truly me :3
Posted by SilhouetteofKid 7 years ago Report
Okay, first: I like this a lot.
It's certainly much scarier despite how simple
it looks. I do realize it sorta looks like Laughing Jack but I think it looks different enough from Laughing Jack since well he doesn't have mouth where is stomach should be.
Plus, I'm guessing that Laughing Jack might be an inspiration for your character. Just be careful that it doesn't look too much like Jack. Also, is your character female, male, or are they genderless? I'm assuming its female from the pigtails but I thought I'd ask first.
Now, while this looks great, it's still flat but not as much as your slender man picture. Around the chest waist area, there's a bit more volume to it.
As for everything else, well, some of the lines aren't connected, never leave broken lines like that unless there's a good reason for it. And some lines are overlapping, it makes it look a bit sloppy.
The stripes are also not wrapping around parts of the body like they should.
The arms should be a little thicker, they're a little too thin and out of place to the rest of the body. Plus, why is he or she sticking their hands inside the chest mouth? Almost looks like their hiding their hands.
Lastly, I am a little concern the way you frame your characters in the image, by which I mean having them posed frontways. I would recommend trying more dynamic poses because it can get kinda boring and repetitive. Basically, try mixing it up.
Overall, nicely done. ^^
Posted by Mettra 7 years ago Report
Thx :3
Posted by SilhouetteofKid 7 years ago Report
No problem, I hope this helps. ^^
Posted by Mettra 7 years ago Report
It should help nicely
Posted by Mettra 7 years ago Report
& mettra is a girl :3 she was actually created by slender man or should i say she was once human but got killed & turned into a monster by slender man as his aplrentice :3
Posted by SilhouetteofKid 7 years ago Report
Ah I see. I'm not too familiar with the Slender Man lore besides just stuff from Marble Hornets or Creepypastas. Mine if I ask some questions about your character?
Posted by Mettra 7 years ago Report
Go right ahead
Posted by SilhouetteofKid 7 years ago Report
What's your character's abilities?
What's their weaknesses or limits?
What's their personality?
Vore method?
Posted by Mettra 7 years ago Report
Mettra has no weaknesses she simply can shape shift into anything & vore anything im thinking of making a drawing of mettra where she vores all of outer space it self i know that sounds ridiculous but i dont care lol :3
Posted by SilhouetteofKid 7 years ago Report
Its not really ridiculous, this is vore we're talking about. Ridiculous left the building when someone half your size can just swallow you whole with ease, this is normal.
I've seen way too many comics or images of characters devouring the universe. If that's what you want to do, go for it and have fun. ^^
Also, just one more question. If Mettra has no weaknesses and can shape shift into anything and eat anything...how is she Slender Man's apprentice? Sounds like Slender Man over stepped his boundaries and created someone more powerful than him. Mettra is literally his master now! XD
Posted by Mettra 7 years ago Report
I know im thinking about maybe he accidentaly made her that powerfull & is now facing the consequences
Posted by SilhouetteofKid 7 years ago Report
That...actually would be hilarious. XD
Posted by Mettra 7 years ago Report
Ill probably make a drawing of mettra being sexy even tho shed be over weight sitting on a slfa with slender man carrying it!
Posted by SilhouetteofKid 7 years ago Report
Sounds cool, can't wait. ^^
Posted by Mettra 7 years ago Report
Yeah ill probably do that
Posted by TinyHero 6 years ago Report
I’m reminded of a character from Super Mario RPG: Legend of the Seven Stars xD
Posted by Mettra 6 years ago Report
Can u send me a link to that character?
Posted by TinyHero 6 years ago Report
Here you go :)
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=rtVUwiljb9A