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Part 3 of ??? For the not so little slime Kollo.
The guards investigate the disappearance of their men and arrest Lavona. To get her back Kollo goes on an adventure in a strange secret underground part of the city.
I've had a lot of trouble writing lately, between being busy and lacking motivation/inspiration. Hopefully these two chapters can tide you all over for a while.
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Posted by Graywolf18 7 years ago Report
Yus... I like Helena. ^//v//^
Lavona is going to need to move into a bigger place for all the ladies that Kolo's about to recruit. :3
Also, WOW. Who'd have thought a government official with free reign and almost unlimited power would be corrupt? Where in the world did you get the inspiration for such an outlandish and fantastical idea such as that? I'm absolutely flabbergasted. -_______-
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
Power without challange or restraint always leads to abuse. It's only a matter of how long it takes to come up with personal justification.
I'm glad you like Helena. She's a bit less agreeable than most of the women in the story.
Posted by giblieherps 7 years ago Report
Still loving Bree. I cant wait to see more of Kollo. Great work thanks. For some reason i am craving a scene where kollo tickles and pleasures bree at the same time.
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
Unfortunately, Bree wasn't hugely prominent in these two chapters, but she's definately still around.
Posted by Devour 7 years ago Report
This is great! Was starting to think you have left the site. Love this and the next as well.
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
Nope, still around. Just slow as all heck. Thank you for the praise.