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Part 2 of ??? of Little Slime in the Big City.
Kollo goes to meet his 'creator'. Almost inevitably, he is drawn into the shadier side of the city.
I hope everyone enjoys this unexpected and relatively fast follow up to the critically acclaimed start to a dump project on my part. This one is a bit shorter, and it ends on a happier note, but the story itself isn't really done. Again, I have no idea if I'm going to keep going. There's a good possibility, but no promises.
Also thank you for all the wonderful compliments last time! Hopefully this one is as good or better.
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Posted by Morthirigan 7 years ago Report
Definitely fast, but I didn't feel it lost quality because of that.
Still some typos here and there. :P
I sure hope you keep 'em coming.
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
Well, thank you! I'll be focusing on some other projects first, so the next chapter, if indeed there is one, won't be out for a while.
Posted by Graywolf18 7 years ago Report
I bow before the sexual prowess or Kolo the Slime. He's going to have a Harem of perpetually satisfied ladies in no time.
I'm already a fan of Bree. It kinda feels like the Madam is getting rewarded for loaning out her sex-slaves tho.
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
She is, but at the same time, he definitely threatened her. When a freakishly intelligent slime threatens you, then gives you the best sex of your life, you tend to let him have what he wants. He's just a good businessman, because he's giving her something she wants in exchange.
Posted by minasan 7 years ago Report
This is definitely my favorite series of yours.
I kind of wish it didn't gloss over the bits with the guards so much, but I suppose it fits with this focusing more on the non-fatal bits.
It's interesting how Lavona finding out he killed and ate some guards doesn't really affect things for her. Despite it making very clear that he could digest her and chooses not to.
Disappointing that his creator had so little information to give them. Though his knowledge of Kollo might serve as motivation for them to leave town later.
Him being able to pose as clothes is an interesting way to get around, though he'll probably want to find a way to turn more opaque to sell it better.
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
Wow that's high praise! Thank you! Yes, unfortunately, I'm personally not a fan of graphic digestion or male prey, though I tend to break my own rules on occasion.
For Lavona, you have to recall she isn't human, and doesn't have any particular love for them. Kollo IS a dangerous monster, and she's known that since day one, when she walked in on him with her cat, not to mention when he could have suffocated her in her sleep. She trusts and likes him way more than humans, plus the world is fantasy, so death is a bit more common than our own world, despite the 'modern city' feel I've given it.Plus she is kind of looking for him to digest her, since that's her fetish and all.
Von Crein was disappointing, but then again, he wasn't trying to make Kollo, so there's only so much he can know. Plus there's no real money in creating monsters, especially smart ones that can think for themselves.
The clothing thing only worked because he was clothing for a hooker, which most people chose to ignore on purpose. People would be a lot more focused on him if it were Lavona wearing a see through dress.
Posted by Devour 7 years ago Report
So glad you continued! This is great!
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by crushxtreame 7 years ago Report
Love it dude
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by crushxtreame 7 years ago Report
U still kicking?
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
Barely.
Posted by crushxtreame 7 years ago Report
hey aleast ur still around
Posted by giblieherps 7 years ago Report
Cant wait to see more of this series. I picked up royal slime from amazon because you created a need. But it is not as good as your series i feel. I hope your 2ritings come along well.
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
Thanks! I really appreciate your praise! I've been very busy, but I've been slowly chugging along and I have two new parts of this out.
Posted by Ev0nix 4 years ago Report
What a hypocritical little slime, entertaining though, he should be more honest with himself
Posted by Arthotus 4 years ago Report
Yeah, but he's horny, so you know how it is.