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Slimes are strange and varied creatures. Some are little, and some are not. This one starts out quite small, but they all have a tendency to grow when they eat things.
Soooo, this wasn't on the schedule, no, but I felt like writing something more upbeat and fun. I didn't think about it a lot, and just kind of threw whatever came to mind on the page, so it might be a little boring in the long run. Oh yeah, it's also long. I completely understand if you don't read through the whole thing. I make no promises about continuing this story. It's also not tied into any of my other stories. Sorry if you like that sort of thing, you know, conclusions. I'm bad at them.
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Posted by ouphe 7 years ago Report
I enjoyed this one :)
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
Thank you. It's kind of a ramble more than a coherent story, so this surprises me a bit.
Posted by UnbirthDude 7 years ago Report
oh god why did i have to find this when it was brand new and not when it had 5 more chapters???? o god why!
PS: great fucking job man.
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
Thanks! I know that feeling! I started reading a manga about a spider that had 3 chapters at the time and got hooked immediately. The wait is so rough!
Posted by UnbirthDude 7 years ago Report
did i hear "Kumo desu ga, nani ka"?
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
You know it!
Posted by giblieherps 7 years ago Report
now yall got me into it :)
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
It's so good though! None of my friends believe me when I try to explain it.
Posted by giblieherps 7 years ago Report
I read through the whole thing the other night and it was great. Are you going to be putting more work into this story anytime soon?
Do you self identify as someone on the spectrum? I do and i think that is why i love that little spider story so much, it gets me in the numbers so well. If you havent heard of it you should read "super sales on super heroes" it hit me that same way. Anyway thanks for this awesome slime story its one of my favorites on ekas already.
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
I've actually started working on it. But...this weekend was exceptionally crazy for me, I've got other projects going, and I might have to do some advanced camping in the next week or two, sooooo, yeah. A continuation 'might' be coming, but if and when it does it'll be a ways out.
Thanks for the suggestion, I'll look into it.
Posted by coldwar368 7 years ago Report
I fucking love this
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
Wonderful! Thanks so much!
Posted by Graywolf18 7 years ago Report
People. This is totes worth the full read. Well done Arthotus, another fantastic addition.
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
Thanks! Don't worry, I'm still chipping away at more stuff for Velida and her friends.
Posted by minasan 7 years ago Report
This is thoroughly amazing.
A pred that has friends they won't digest is always good to me.
It's an interesting world and quite a long read already, but I could see this going for many chapters more. There's so many things you could have Kollo do.
I really hope you continue this story.
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
I initially wanted him to be a bit more sociopathic, but as I kept writting I went with a more normal personality for him.
Yes there are, and we'll see what other kinds of hijinks he gets up to in the future!
Posted by crushxtreame 7 years ago Report
Besides a few spelling errors this is one of the best story's ive read on this site
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
I'll reprimamd my proofreader! Thanks, I appreciate your praise.
Posted by Blabatron 7 years ago Report
You'll have to reprimand them for this comment too lol
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
Waht do you maen?
Posted by Blabatron 7 years ago Report
You spelled reprimand as reprimamd. Sorry if I confused you.
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
I was kidding. I am aware of the typo. It was international.
Posted by Blabatron 7 years ago Report
Well... That's unexpected. Well, keep up the good work man!
Posted by Darkwarrior676 7 years ago Report
Really enjoyed this and hoping for a next part to the story. Excellent job.
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
I didn't know if I was going to do a second part, but I guess I'll throw more ink onto the page after so much positive feedback! Thank you!
Posted by Darkwarrior676 7 years ago Report
Oh no thank you!! We all agree this is a great read and of course it has us hooked for hopefully more of whats to come. Thanks!!!
Posted by Devour 7 years ago Report
this is fantastic! I really hope you continue.
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by giblieherps 7 years ago Report
Dude i thought this was a stand alone. This is awesome. I cant wait for the next piece, i love your encasement and the story is great. It almost hurts how much i want the next episode.
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
We'll see if the follow ups are as good, I feel like my sequels are generally lesser quality than my initial pitches. Thank you for the praise!
Posted by Morthirigan 7 years ago Report
This story of yours most likely ruined my workday tomorrow because I've stayed up reading it instead of going to bed, and I regret nothing! Thank you!
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
Haha! Sorry! Maybe I'll try to post future stories on the weekend.
Posted by Anonymouslion 6 years ago Report
For the record: it’s pixies that are pranksters, they are a subspecies of fairy.
Posted by Arthotus 6 years ago Report
Fairy is a very broad term amongst fey, where as pixie is much more generally used to point to the smaller, winged fae yes. I would argue that classically all forms of fae are pranksters, with some being more vicious and dangerous, such as leprechauns amd spriggans. To me, pixies are more elemental than fairies, more emotion incarnate and given vague winged form, rather than the tiny people that I depict fairies as.
Posted by Anonymouslion 6 years ago Report
What I mean is the average fairy is more…mature, I guess, they aren't as mischievous as pixies.