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I have apologies to make.
Firstly, I'd like to apologize for taking so long on this story. It's been nearly two years since the last installment, and a lot has happened in that time. I graduated from college, my hard drive crashed (twice), I moved (twice), I began dating again, I found a job, I quit a job, I found another job...my excuses could go on forever. The point that I'd like to focus on is the fact that though I've been quite busy, I still could have put more time and effort into this story and shared it with you all much, much faster.
Secondly, I'd like to apologize for this story. Though I have only three to show thus far, it's far too early for me to dislike any of them as much as I do this one. The plot was changed and switched around and transformed too much to remember what it used to be. At least 15 pages worth of content (that I was rather proud of) was cut entirely. Very important moments occur in this chapter and the next, and the bar for quality, in my opinion, was set far too low with this one.
(And I may come back in the future to rewrite a few scenes here yet again, but I really just want this particular story to be finished for good.)
Overwhelming self-pity aside, I'm looking forward to the next chapter very much. It will be challenging to write, but I cannot wait to get started on it.
Word Count: 23.3k
Ferra is on the prowl, and despite initial distractions due to memories of her unwilling ferret companion still fresh on her mind, she manages to hunt down and subdue (through her own predatory charms) a delectable rabbit. The vixen indulges herself in the meal, yet is still teased by thoughts of the ferret. What became of him? Will she ever stumble upon him again?
And finally, a warning: this chapter gets rather dark. It explores areas that I'm not fully comfortable with writing, but...I did my best. The next story will lighten the mood considerably, and that is a promise.
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Posted by GBBG 7 years ago Report
I read this and have to say it was quite enjoyable. I think the ending was very well written, with good suspense. I like the relaxed pace of the story, which makes it feel more real than most others I've read.
Posted by RuffledFerret 7 years ago Report
Apologies for the late reply. Thanks very much for the kind words. I'm happy to hear it reads as well as I hoped it would!
Posted by EvangelineSkypaw 6 years ago Report
;w;
th-the end...?
Posted by RuffledFerret 6 years ago Report
Heh, this is only part 1. I have much of part 2 written up, though it will take some time to get it out.
I hope you've been enjoying so far!
Posted by EvangelineSkypaw 6 years ago Report
am like ";w; oh no" and yet want to read more,,
so if that counts as enjoyment, ye
>w<
Posted by Vulpini18 1 year ago Report
Hi, how are you doing? I was wondering if you ever plan on coming back to this story or if you are done writing this sort of stuff.
Posted by HungryFox3586 1 year ago Report
This is really good stuff! I think you are way too hard on yourself when it comes to writing. Your stories don't have to be perfect. If that's your goal, you'll never accomplish it, as being perfect is impossible. Write what feels good to you, and don't stress so much about perfection or minor errors you may or may not have made. I'd love it if you could write more stories like this. Your writing is compelling, and I'd like to know what comes next after this story!
Posted by Randomness 1 year ago Report
This was fantastic. Thank you for the wonderful story.