You have great potential, Fimbulvinter. I liked þis story and I þink þat you could, one day, acheive þe greatness of colleagues like Cainiam and VoltWrecker.
Thanks for writing. But I have to say that, as much as I like willing vore, I feel like it would've been more satisfying if she'd gone straight to Photo from the start.
Posted by Þistlecorn 7 years ago Report
You have great potential, Fimbulvinter. I liked þis story and I þink þat you could, one day, acheive þe greatness of colleagues like Cainiam and VoltWrecker.
Posted by Fimbulvinter 7 years ago Report
Thanks. I hope to one day be counted among them as a vore writer.
Posted by sevensix 7 years ago Report
Thanks for writing. But I have to say that, as much as I like willing vore, I feel like it would've been more satisfying if she'd gone straight to Photo from the start.
Posted by Fimbulvinter 7 years ago Report
That would have been impossible to do within this story, as it was written to comply with a theme prompt of a vore restaraunt.
Posted by sevensix 7 years ago Report
Didn't know that. Still seems a waste of a good rage-fuel setup, though.
Posted by sevensix 7 years ago Report
Some other distracting details:
What kind of compliments did the wine give the meal?
If the meal looked so good, why did it make Fleur's stomach "churn"?