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Chapter 3 of The Perks of an Amazonian Girlfriend.
A lot shorter than previous chapters, this is more like chapter 2.5 - it's how I planned to finish chapter 2 but it was already taking too long. It too me a long time to finish this, for some reason I found it really hard to get it in a way I was mainly happy with.
A bit less vore/sex action this time, but sets things up nicely for future fun times.
I've omitted a specific tag to avoid spoilers - I'm sure you can work out which one once you read this part. Nothing nasty, I promise.
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Posted by Eclipseneko51 7 years ago Report
Wow what a fantastic development I'm really glad you progressed the story like that i can't wait to see what you do next nice work
Posted by Gershwin 7 years ago Report
I’m glad you enjoyed it. When writing it I felt the situation was rushed a bit, but in the end I don’t have time to write a full on novel, so it is what it is. Then again I’ve hit 20,000 words which *is* short book length!
What’s your favourite scene so far?
Posted by Eclipseneko51 7 years ago Report
Im not to sure actually i like a lot of the scenes so far honestly but i think it would definitely be the scene in ch1 where alexa and mandy were in the bar i think, it was the scene where they were fighting for the strawberry and it almost ended up in mandy being swallowed by alexa.
(Sorry for my poor grammar as well)
Posted by Gershwin 7 years ago Report
Cool, I like that scene too.
Posted by datx1 6 years ago Report
The way you write from perspective is cool. I feel really immersed by your descriptions. And I feel invested in your characters. I hope you'll have time to write more soon!
Posted by Gershwin 6 years ago Report
I’m glad you enjoyed it. I’m currently working on an enhanced edition of the first three parts, to clean up plot holes, spelling / grammar mistakes and adding some content where it lacked.
Once that’s done, I’ll start on part four.
What was your favourite scene from all three parts? I like to ask as it helps guide what I may focus on.
Posted by MCPB 6 years ago Report
Are you still planning a part 4?
Posted by Gershwin 6 years ago Report
I am, I have about 7000 words done but it feels not ready. I need to re-read it, work out why or something. A few holes to fill too, I skipped writing the first part and jumped into about 1/3 of the way through! Just takes time reading, making notes, editing, etc
Posted by anyany 6 years ago Report
More!!! this is amazing :)
Posted by TuckingFypo 6 years ago Report
Hoping for the next part in this series.
Posted by Gershwin 6 years ago Report
I’m doing it, just taking forever!
Posted by liveingirlstummies 6 years ago Report
Am I a bad person for hoping she digested? I normally hope they live but something about this series...
Posted by Gershwin 6 years ago Report
Ooooh your so bad! :D
Posted by liveingirlstummies 6 years ago Report
Oh Noes! Guess I better feed myself to Alexa then!
Posted by Gershwin 6 years ago Report
I think you’d do better breaking some Amazonian rules and “accidentally” being caught by Francesca, given her position ;) Alexa is more about “vore as part of an all female romance” than “eating people cos it’s fun”.
Posted by Thatguy69 6 years ago Report
hello, so i just found this series today and i want to say i love it :D the vore and insertion scenes are perfect! i loved how Francesca ate Mandy out of Alexa's pussy but would have loved if Alexa actually did eat her out at least for a little bit before things got too bad and maybe Mandy would have even enjoyed herself? ;P either way amazing story and i cant wait for chapter 4! speaking of, any eta on when it might be finished? :P
Posted by Gershwin 6 years ago Report
I’m happy to hear you enjoyed it!
I have a very incomplete draft at the moment that’s already hitting 11k words, I’m progressing it again now that KINKS is wrapped up for the moment. Haha it’s becoming a little bigger than I originally planned!
Posted by Thatguy69 6 years ago Report
glad to hear it and cant wait for the next part to come out :D also food for thought, i know you dont like having characters that become friends and such digested but i was thinking maybe you could have another human girl come along to join in the fun only to be "accidentally" digested ;P just a thought i had, feel free to take note of it or disregard it completely as its your story after all and an amazing one none the less :P gotta be honest though i felt like the KINKS story ended a little early and would have hoped for more fun but was still great none the less
Posted by Gershwin 6 years ago Report
I think within the universe of this story
"accidentally" taking someone's life would be considered a pretty horrible (and not consequence free) event and mentally scaring for the person who did it. What Francesca did was for a greater purpose and wasn't aimed at "because it'd be hot", even if she was sort of enjoying it at the time.
However, I suspect you will enjoy the next chapter...
As for KINKS (and indeed with this story) I feel the need to close narrative arcs before too long. I find that after a while the situation and events become stale, there's only so many ways I can describe being swallowed and shoved in various holes before I'm basically repeating my self.
That doesn't preclude me from simply writing a new story which involves those characters and KINKS but from a new starting point, allowing me to frame events in a new/different way and move things along, do a time skip, etc.
There's also the commission side, if someone (as was done before) simply commissions more KINKS work then I do more KINKS work, I guess. I have ideas for where I may go next with it, but won't be working on it for a while now - going to try and get the next (possibly two) final chapters of this story done, then attempt to do the next chapter of "Dream Come True" which has often been requested, then ... not sure what comes next :D I may do a few short stories.
Heck, if you want a digestion scene involving some specific characters, you could always commission a short story as a "non-canon" offshoot of this story.
Posted by Thatguy69 6 years ago Report
fair enough that's understandable :P i only suggested that because the way you describe your characters having dark desires to just digest the person in their stomach makes me kinda want to see it happen sooner or later and could spice things up but i do see your point and understand, personally i don't mind repetition as long as its not just copy pasted identical stuff but you would have to be a pretty bad writer to do that in the first place lol. on the commissions side of things i might just have to take you up on that offer when i have a bit more cash :D what is your going rate for commissions btw? feel free to message me the details if you would prefer and we can discuss further
Posted by Soulary 5 years ago Report
Thank you for writing this series. I definitely enjoyed it! ^3^
Posted by Gershwin 5 years ago Report
Glad you liked it. I’ve struggled to get much writing done recently, but have a half done epic finale for this story. I’ll get there eventually.