I'm a little behind on posting "Taking a Dip" pages, so I might update a few times over the next week or two, though as always, latest Patreon pages are delayed. I'm not very active online at the moment, hence the delay, just got a lot going on

For any fans of my story "Taking a Dip", check out the fantastic artwork based on one of the scenes being posted by  XiaoRenzhe.

You can find one of the first coloured versions here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/660544

And the complete scene here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/655610

And the original story on my own gallery of course: https://aryion.com/g4/view/640929

I’ve decided to give this a go, so created a commissions page: https://aryion.com/g4/userpage.commissi ... d=Gershwin

Let’s see how this works out!

A”short story” I said. A “quick diversion”. 3000 words in on part two of the “quicky”... I’ve horribly over complicated it! Oh well means more for you lot. I just need to work out how to end the damn thing now!

I've written a MUCH enhanced edition of the first chapter. It took a lot more work than I thought it would!

I'd very much appreciate comments and thoughts on this version so I can work out if I should do the same to chapter two and three.

I believe that even if you've read it before it's worth a second look, it's really changed a lot.

You can find it here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/426539