Nice story, I really liked the setup. It was interesting to get a glimpse at the various tribes and how they selected their sacrifices, also the various decorations of the meals was a good touch. I really wished this was a bit longer (which is a rare reaction for me) How do the various tribes live? Why did the feline wish for lizard peace? And of course on the more vorish side, it would have been lovely to see how they all, even the brave lizard girl break eventually as their bodies start to melt.
If the next stories will be like this I will definitely look forwards to them.
The glimpse of the tribes was a deliberate choice. It's a setting I wish to return to and build on. The vorish side was mostly me being uncertain of how far I could go. Thank you for your comment.
My pleasure. What exactly do you mean by seeing how far you could go? Do you have trouble describing certain things you wanted to include?
Also glad to hear this theme will return.
Posted by Fischie 6 years ago Report
Nice story, I really liked the setup. It was interesting to get a glimpse at the various tribes and how they selected their sacrifices, also the various decorations of the meals was a good touch. I really wished this was a bit longer (which is a rare reaction for me) How do the various tribes live? Why did the feline wish for lizard peace? And of course on the more vorish side, it would have been lovely to see how they all, even the brave lizard girl break eventually as their bodies start to melt.
If the next stories will be like this I will definitely look forwards to them.
Posted by Eldachoon 6 years ago Report
The glimpse of the tribes was a deliberate choice. It's a setting I wish to return to and build on. The vorish side was mostly me being uncertain of how far I could go. Thank you for your comment.
Posted by Fischie 6 years ago Report
My pleasure. What exactly do you mean by seeing how far you could go? Do you have trouble describing certain things you wanted to include?
Also glad to hear this theme will return.
Posted by Eldachoon 6 years ago Report
I was worried going too hard on digestion and stuff might alienate some people. Not something I want to do.
Posted by Fischie 6 years ago Report
I simply add a dotted line or something where hard digestion starts so people can stop reading or not. Maybe that helps you?