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Written as a request for a friend, the same friend who came up with the Darkovix character from "A Wicked Revenge".
One day, three female (and naked!) hunters go to slay a beast. A gigantic frog. The hunters' minds are pure, their weapons are strong, their training is complete. Yet soon they learn that it all means nothing against such a powerful predator...
So yeah, another story! Some nice, simple, frog vore, done for a friend. Fair warning, it has disposal at the end, and some pissing in it in the middle. It isn't too severe, it's somewhat similar to the urine in the disposal version of "Devouring The Dinosaur Hunters". Read it if you want.
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Posted by InvalidResponse 5 years ago Report
What file type did you use to make the site not fuck up your formatting?
Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report
I used .rtf, but I'm not entirely sure if that's why it's working. I think I might've had problems with it in the past, but that might've been in regards to horizontal lines.
Posted by Kasra 5 years ago Report
Really nice work!
Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report
Thank you! What made it so nice for you, Kasra?
Posted by Kasra 5 years ago Report
Hm...if I had to pick, I'd say the internal scenes. They were very well described, from the swallow to the small amount of space to the textures involve, it was very well done.
Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report
Wow, thank you. Honestly though, I wouldn't say I focused an excessive amount of time on those scenes. I could've probably done a bit more to them, detailed it a bit more. But it worked at least!
Posted by Nugget1138 5 years ago Report
Awesome story, the characterization of the girls was great, loved seeing the brave leader go down first and how hopeless the girls were afterwards. Frogs always make for great efficient and indifferent predators and you captured that very well with all of the POVs. Excellent stuff
Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report
Why thank you on all counts! It seems that you're not the only one to love this stuff too, as this has been getting plenty of favourites! It has almost as many favourites as another piece I wrote that was up for 5 months!
Posted by Halcyon 5 years ago Report
Absolutely lovely! I said that I loved frog preds, and you did them such wonderful justice in this piece! The vore scenes were so fun and full of anticipation that I read the whole thing without stopping. And digestion from you is such a wonderful treat as well~
Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report
Awww, thank you, calling me a treat. What makes my digestion so good, if I may ask?
Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report
Hey, thanks for the comment Genly, I do appreciate it! Personally, I prefer Victoria, and how her ass was being licked in the mouth while she was left helpless to fight it.
And I'm glad you liked the disposal.
I think I should tell you that the friend who asked for this story, also requested a prequel as well, with more froggy feeding...
Posted by Jamie263 5 years ago Report
I love Frog preds. Nice work
Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report
Thank you. But if you don't mind me asking, what made it nice to you?
Posted by Jamie263 5 years ago Report
I like how much you described the internal stuff such as the swallowing and inside the stomach.
Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report
Thank you for the feedback!