Not bad, however, I have to point out a few things. (However, I don't remember how you take criticism , so if you know you don't take it very well, just ignore what I wrote below this, but I think it's in your best interest to at least consider).
I'm willing to bet he mentioned the arms being a bit short. Either way, It's what i'm definitely saying. I usually have the same issue. That and it looks like there was a bit of trouble connecting the breast to the torso. Looks to me its connected to the shoulder. its just the peak though really, Because if you take a look at the part where the breast should connect with the torso, then look at her neck, things don't quite line up. Last real thing Ii can mention really is that her head might be a tad bit too twisted. The hair reaching the front of her body by her turning her head supports this theory of mine...Anywho,
Oh, hey Brohan! Absolutely no offense, in fact, is a honor to receive a comment by you! Much thanks for the critiques, I'll make myself sure to use them at my best! Thanks! :D
Hot as this is maybe she should have just tried the outfit and a sex tape before eating someone... Ot ate a grumpig or something with less matter to gain...
Just saying I know I'm on a vore site but shes right she didn't think this through XD
Posted by Mettra 6 years ago Report
I think her fans will definately love her for all the right reasons ^^
Posted by MobiusTheIce 6 years ago Report
If you swap "right reasons" with "Butts", then yeah XD
Posted by Mettra 6 years ago Report
Lemme smash X3 (why did i just say that )
Posted by Thefiredemongotlost 6 years ago Report
big booty is best booty
Posted by MobiusTheIce 6 years ago Report
Super duper right XD
Posted by Thefiredemongotlost 6 years ago Report
DAMN RIGHT BOI
Posted by LuluLuigi 6 years ago Report
I am coming , for the booty he he he~
Posted by MobiusTheIce 6 years ago Report
Well, booty is still the best thingie, hehe :D
Posted by LuluLuigi 6 years ago Report
Of course ! >:D
Posted by smog1 6 years ago Report
HOOLLYYYY YESSSS! Latex :D
Posted by MobiusTheIce 6 years ago Report
Latex is good, yeah? Hehe XP
Posted by JackHereTheRealOne 6 years ago Report
Not bad, however, I have to point out a few things. (However, I don't remember how you take criticism , so if you know you don't take it very well, just ignore what I wrote below this, but I think it's in your best interest to at least consider).
I'm willing to bet he mentioned the arms being a bit short. Either way, It's what i'm definitely saying. I usually have the same issue. That and it looks like there was a bit of trouble connecting the breast to the torso. Looks to me its connected to the shoulder. its just the peak though really, Because if you take a look at the part where the breast should connect with the torso, then look at her neck, things don't quite line up. Last real thing Ii can mention really is that her head might be a tad bit too twisted. The hair reaching the front of her body by her turning her head supports this theory of mine...Anywho,
Posted by MobiusTheIce 6 years ago Report
Oh, hey Brohan! Absolutely no offense, in fact, is a honor to receive a comment by you! Much thanks for the critiques, I'll make myself sure to use them at my best! Thanks! :D
Posted by N7Slayer 6 years ago Report
Wouldn't mind crowning her as champ with them curves
Posted by MobiusTheIce 6 years ago Report
Well, watch out to don't lose to her, tho XD
Posted by Yuyuko1995 6 years ago Report
Oooo, that makes my favorite poke trainer even more lovable
Posted by MobiusTheIce 6 years ago Report
Ha, I'm glad you like it! I tried my best XD
Posted by dpZ1234 6 years ago Report
I thought that was the reason she was famous in the first place
Posted by MobiusTheIce 6 years ago Report
Oh, really? XD
Posted by MetaKitsune 5 years ago Report
Hot as this is maybe she should have just tried the outfit and a sex tape before eating someone... Ot ate a grumpig or something with less matter to gain...
Just saying I know I'm on a vore site but shes right she didn't think this through XD