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Don't know how I feel about this chapter... the outline is made and this works for the structure I've set for the plot, but as for where the chapter goes.... eh could've been better.
And again love feedback, even negative feedback, just as long as it's chill :)
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Posted by Scion 6 years ago Report
I think its fine :) good job dude
Posted by eastsportman 6 years ago Report
Much appreciated! Feel better about it now, I think after going back to edit this, I just had different ideas of how I would've written it.
Posted by blinktud 6 years ago Report
It was great dude. You gonna try different vore methods for the next one?
Posted by eastsportman 6 years ago Report
Thanks man! Don't want to give away any specific spoilers, so I'll say that you will Lauryn's tastes evolve over time.
Posted by DanceMovesFutanariverse 6 years ago Report
Accidental anal vore is probably the best form of accidental vore! :Q
Posted by eastsportman 6 years ago Report
It's so good! The only one that can see it coming is the one about to go in.
Posted by DanceMovesFutanariverse 6 years ago Report
Yeah I love it! :D