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After that insanity, Mint and Chelsea return to home base to take stock. The plot thickens around them.
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Ugh, these descriptions kill me. I never really know what to write without spoiling things.
Ok, chapter three is short and doesn't have any vore. It's a build up chapter, I swear. Stay with me. Next chapter is gonna be the thing.
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Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 6 years ago Report
If you die in the game you die in real life. I also can't shake the feeling that Mint is going to have a sort of "cliff scenario" play out later.
Posted by Arthotus 6 years ago Report
Cliff scenariio? Like Lion King?
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 6 years ago Report
Like "two of your best friends are hanging off a cliff and you can only save one" scenario.
Posted by Arthotus 6 years ago Report
Ah! We shall see!
Posted by Graywolf18 6 years ago Report
Shame on you shadow man, you skipped the part I was most looking forward to. But you made of for it with the FBI agent. She gunna look good as a stomach bulge. :3
RIP Mint PC, never forgetti. Some one call nerd squad... that's still a thing right?
Also, FBI? I was expecting some secret shadow Yakuza branch of evil game designers. (you know the one I mean *wink wink*) Ah well... I'll forgive ya this time since their poster child is a knock out beast of a woman who'll shortly be an extra layer of chest fat for Chelsea to molest. I'm just going to sit on that image for a bit. Till next time chum.
Posted by Arthotus 6 years ago Report
Alexandra isn't really an FBI agent. But very few people could call her on that bluff, considering her mysterious backer.
And don't get too far ahead of yourself. Alexandra isn't just a pretty face and a gorgeous, toned, perfectly bronzed, beach babe, Seven foot body. She's got some life in her yet.
Posted by Graywolf18 6 years ago Report
I know. I was just giving ya some shit for the cliche. And I know Alexandra isn't some chump pushover, but come on mate... protagonist powers activate. As for her mysterious backer? Dude, we all know it's the Illusive man from Mass Effect. You didn't even try to hide that one. :P
Posted by Arthotus 6 years ago Report
I might be cashing in some of my gamer cred, but I've never played Mass Effect. I'm only vaguely familiar with its story, so I don't know who you're talking about.
Posted by Graywolf18 6 years ago Report
Meh, I'm not one of those guys that'll crucify you for missing a reference. I also know that the later tittles may be enough to dissuade someone from picking the games up so no judgement there either. 1&2 are worth picking up tho. 3's alright after they remade the ending.... and Andromeda? .... it's fun? But don't play it for the story. :V (and I'm being generous because I'm a slut for the online play)
Now that I'm done whoring myself out to EA and outing myself as a HUGE nerd... Fun story! :DDDDD Looking forward for the next one~
Posted by Arthotus 6 years ago Report
That's in line with what I heard about them.
Thank you! I'm surprised there's so much interest in a voreless chapter.
Posted by Graywolf18 6 years ago Report
Chapters like this, waiting for the vore, is like the build up in a hunt. It makes the "kill" so much more satisfying.
Fitting, no? :3
Posted by GeneralUrist 6 years ago Report
This mysterious science team seems veeeery shady and suspicious and maybe evil.
Reptiles are cold-blooded, and Mint's new skin felt oddly sensitive to cold. I hope she doesn't become completely cold-blooded, or she's catamose or worse all winter.
Welp, the MIB are onto them, the world have almost merged completely, and the calm from their relaxation-sex didn't last long. Though, the There Will Be No Second Chance thing is makes me very worried. And TBH I utterly <i>hate</i> games with permadeath >:(
Either way though:
GAME TIME STARTED!
Now a serious critique: you need to make the transition between the MintyChel scenes and the totally-not-men in black" scenes more obvious, for example with a couple blank lines. Right now the transition between them is really awkward because there is nothing to indicate the scene change t othe reader.
Posted by Arthotus 6 years ago Report
Fuck! I forgot that the line I use in Word to seperate the sections doesn't show up in the Eka's display. I'll fix this in all the chapyers so far and moving forward, thank you!
The Rainbow Raptor is indeed cold blooded, but Mint is still warm blooded, so her new skin is just sensitive. Luckily, it's not a normal reptile, so even in subzero temperatures it can still operate. Not at 100%, but not useless either.