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I felt like writing this, thought about it on my way home.
Probably a warm-up write for more stories, I should write more stuff that OTHER people like rather than me
again, suggest stuff
Edit, fixed tags. turns out someone didn't think this counted as breast vore but ok whatever.
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Posted by Apostolos 6 years ago Report
Hmm interesting but you lost me at some points
Posted by Scarecrow1 6 years ago Report
Can you give me an example for improvement?
Posted by Apostolos 6 years ago Report
There seems to be a sudden jump at the description of the feelings of miniature humans jumping around within her, to somehow having failed in a task, and the wording for the last multiple line paragraph is a bit confusing with the hoover bits
Posted by Scarecrow1 6 years ago Report
Yes. I can see what you mean.
Translation mistake, missed 2-3 lines. Will fix soon thanks
Posted by Apostolos 6 years ago Report
Ah okay
Posted by Scarecrow1 6 years ago Report
Turkish is my native, so I write in that and then translate line by line.
I miss some sometimes
Posted by Blankity 6 years ago Report
really interested in the couple of stories you've written so far, would love to see you explore more scenarios that lead from vore to possession
Posted by Scarecrow1 6 years ago Report
Possession isnt really my kink, but I tend to drift to it a lot.
I'm juggling 3 translation rn but one is possession focused
Posted by Blankity 6 years ago Report
no pressure, your scenarios have been pretty creative so far
Posted by Scarecrow1 6 years ago Report
I work 11 hours at a factory mon-sat.
My mind drifts, guess it works out