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Here we go the first chapter in my fallout 4 fan fic reboot. Its got action, comedy, Vore, digestion, guns, and other fun things. No scat for now. Not gonna lie went a bit overboard looking at about 50 pages of text plus pics in this one. If you don't like hard digestion might not be the one for you. Doesn't have hard vore but the swallowing is a bit painful for someone.
Also Colour is not miss spelled I don't care what Microsoft says its the right way.
Disclaimer: I do not own Fallout 4 or its characters. Belly meshes are from Gat. All of this is possible thanks to Voremersion by Carreau.
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Posted by The K 6 years ago Report
Impressive story. I loved the digestive part and the belches.
Posted by tgawsome 6 years ago Report
Thanks! Digestion plus belches make a great story as far as im concerned.
Posted by Graywolf18 6 years ago Report
Welp... Akichista's makeover didn't do anything to save her sense of humor. Some things are a lost cause I s'pose. *shakes head tentatively*
Posted by tgawsome 6 years ago Report
It's the drugs kids don't do drugs. It kills your sense of humor.
Posted by Lovingutitis 6 years ago Report
I'm so happy you're back to writing this series, even if you're starting over. I was really getting into the story when you stopped writing it, but I can understand if you want to start from the beginning after reviewing it. However, I really liked the character Elizabeth because of her inner conflict between wanting to feed herself to Aki but not wanting to die... yet. Not to sway you, but I would be really happy if you planned on putting a character like her in this iteration, even if she's not the same person or personality.
Posted by tgawsome 6 years ago Report
I plan on keep my characters such as Jules and Elizabeth. The biggest issue I had was the pacing of the story, and that I felt didn't have enough vore in it.
A good example would be the internal conflict Elizabeth has. In my previous story, I didn't really spend too much time with it.this time we will spend more time with this issue, and how it will affect both characters.
So the overall plot and characters will stay pretty much the same save some cosmetic differences and one name change.
Posted by Lovingutitis 6 years ago Report
AWESOME! That's what I was hoping.
Posted by GoldenKuji 5 years ago Report
Really glad I discovered this, I love your flavorful descriptions from the pred and prey's povs!
Posted by tgawsome 5 years ago Report
Thanks! Glad my word salad is tasty to someone out there!
Posted by ElJorro 3 years ago Report
This is one of my all time favorite vore stories. The fact that it takes place in the fallout universe makes it all the sweeter. The whole narrative adds a layer of realism to the whole vore scenario that I enjoy. Chista herself is an excellent protagonist, a proud predator and not a typical heroine. I love it!
Posted by tgawsome 3 years ago Report
Oh! Thank you! It's been a while since I posted this so I'm a bit flattered to see your kind words. :)