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here we are with ch 2. A hart warming tale of a mutant and her new found friend.
a few references.
Ici Musique is a jazz radio station in Montreal.
Klick is slang for a kilometer. its kinda conman but Im certain theirs someone who wont know that.
Now a bit of warning for everyone. This chapter has heavy scat and farting in it. Now while I may like that some of you dear readers may not. So I have marked where the fart and scat scenes start so that you can stop there if you don't want those things.
Disclaimer: I do not own Fallout 4 or its characters. Belly meshes are from Gat. All of this is possible thanks to Voremersion by Carreau.
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Posted by The K 5 years ago Report
Great story. I loved the entire belch sequence of belching up that boot. The stench, the gas bubble, and how you added details about her digestive system through it.
Posted by tgawsome 5 years ago Report
Thanks! What better way to show your prey is all done than belching up a shoe. Although she probably wished she had coughed up the other shoe as well...
Posted by Pyrod 5 years ago Report
Love the detailed indigestion sequences. The scat scene was on point
Posted by tgawsome 5 years ago Report
Thanks man! Also your profile pick makes it seem like todd howard is screaming this at me.
Posted by Pyrod 5 years ago Report
He's upset people haven't pre-order double copies of fall out 76.
Posted by tgawsome 5 years ago Report
Pre-orders are down. Guess ill load up Eka's always something there. -Todd Howard
Posted by Sempai13 5 years ago Report
Okay. So. I like to think I've read a few stories in my day, but honestly you may be my favorite vore writer right now.. Like I just finished both Ch.1 & 2 and you've managed to hit just about every "button" for me. I loved how you balanced the plot with vore, like how you develop the plot one moment and then pull us back to why we're reading, the vore! As far as I'm concerned there are 4 main characters: Chista, Chista's gut, intestines and bowels. One of those buttons (which rarely get pressed) is when writers give characters body parts "personality" or give it character as if it was a thinking, breathing person (I mean in a way it is..) I love how Chista talks to her gut and prey throughout the whole process from when he first gets in his new home to his unceremonious departure <3 Speaking of, I loved the whole details and descriptive words used in the digestion (pulsating intestines <3), indigestion, the gas, sounds, smells and dump. Honestly the whole journey sequence for our raider friend was a treat and it was nice that Chista was carrying on with her life while we kept getting updates on him through the whole thing. Anyway, this is getting long and I feel like I could have more to say on the smaller things I enjoyed, but maybe another time... If I paid for this, I'd be pretty happy. Thanks for this and I look forward to more from you.
Posted by Sempai13 5 years ago Report
One last thing (I'll need to look into getting my art folder set up so I can post shit) but If you're cool with it I'd like to do some fanart of Chista at some point, she def in the top of my pred list.
Posted by tgawsome 5 years ago Report
Thanks for the detailed comment! No seriously its feedback like this that motivates me to keep going, and lets me know how i'm doing. To be honest I take a lot of inspiration from Binge, Cryos,Inghost, Ryanshowseason3 here on the portal. So if you like my writing go give their gallery's a look (you probably have).
Also I have no objection to any fan art, stories, or whatever of Chista or the other characters I got in the works.