On a serious note though, I'm happy to see more Berserk vore art. Here I thought I was the only one filling this niche with my crappy captions. Good work!
I love the shading on this pic, the ass, the believable bulges, and especially that face, but he's right, Casca's upper torso does look a little unnaturally elongated due to that curvature.
There are many series I love, and some of them I really never thought could overlap with my taste in vore. Today I was proven wrong, and it's nice to be wrong.
Ok before I dive into this critique, I want to preface it by saying something.
This is the kind of artwork you didn't know you wanted to see untill it existed so thank you for making Berserk and vore come together in a picturesque fashion.
Now onto business,
Using Casca as the pred gets a thumbs up because I don't see many dark skinned characters in simliar settings, the background does a good job of adding a sense of calm and tranquility while not being too eyecatching enough to shift the focus anywhere other than onto Casaca herself.
Now for the thing that got mentioned so much you made a blog about it and yes I mean Casca's spine. People pointed out how the spine is seemingly bend inward and out of shape. Here I'm going to stretch things by adding logic into this:
First considering the size of both Casaca (165cm & 50kg) and Griffith (178cm & 66kg), it does make sense for Casaca's posture to be the way it is due to Griffith's weight on her smaller frame and she is adjusting to it having presumably just eaten him. There is also the fact that the way Casca is framed isn't fully sidewards on but slighty turned to the right warping the perpective and impressing on the viewer that the struture is out.
Personally I'd suggest that more shine could have been added to Casaca's hair and skin like on her breasts or shoulders to show the light source to further emphasize the moisture of the water, I also feel the three spit droplets by her mouth aren't needed.
Aside from these, you have used great detail in the shading showing her musculature, the bulges of the belly itself, Casaca's battle scars and the colour contrast of her nipples & lips.
Lastly, Personally I would like to see a followup of this maybe showing Casca walking onto the bank holding the belly or something along those lines. Hope this has been helpful and looking forward to seeing more from you Killer :3
Thanks for overall enjoying the piece. The real joy was making vore art around Casca.
The initial sketch was done in 30 minutes, with added muscle definition. I didn't really refine it, wouldn't care too because I still like the piece flawed or not, this is a sketch if anything. A very lucky one, but anatomy wasn't taken too much into account.
I'm glad you like the details. I mostly wanted to loosen myself with this piece. I did try out a lot of things for the first time here, but I'm satisfied with the result.
Posted by Hot_Plate 6 years ago Report
HOLY SHIT, ACTUAL BERSERK FANART ON THIS SITE! WHAT-
Posted by Hot_Plate 6 years ago Report
On a serious note though, I'm happy to see more Berserk vore art. Here I thought I was the only one filling this niche with my crappy captions. Good work!
Posted by KillerPerro 6 years ago Report
The reaction is fine. I'd be pretty stoked if there was more Casca vore.
Posted by Vdiem 6 years ago Report
There's a lot of detail here. Looking really good. Think the spine binding is a bit much.
Posted by StygianSkies 6 years ago Report
I love the shading on this pic, the ass, the believable bulges, and especially that face, but he's right, Casca's upper torso does look a little unnaturally elongated due to that curvature.
Posted by Green_Glutton 6 years ago Report
This turned out great, Pero! :D
Posted by KillerPerro 6 years ago Report
Draw more Cinnamon Roll damn it
Posted by Green_Glutton 6 years ago Report
maaaaybeeeeee
Posted by bwill194 6 years ago Report
If this were to happen if Casca were to use the grey Behelit, I’d be totally fine with this outcome, honestly...
Posted by royalwerewolf 6 years ago Report
it would've been a mercy wouldn't it?
Posted by BlueIce 6 years ago Report
Casca is secrete mvp
Posted by Monopolus 6 years ago Report
Wow, this is awesome
Posted by seriousdoomguy 6 years ago Report
a rare sight indeed
Posted by Saiai 6 years ago Report
There are many series I love, and some of them I really never thought could overlap with my taste in vore. Today I was proven wrong, and it's nice to be wrong.
Posted by DarkNeroInfini 6 years ago Report
Ok before I dive into this critique, I want to preface it by saying something.
This is the kind of artwork you didn't know you wanted to see untill it existed so thank you for making Berserk and vore come together in a picturesque fashion.
Now onto business,
Using Casca as the pred gets a thumbs up because I don't see many dark skinned characters in simliar settings, the background does a good job of adding a sense of calm and tranquility while not being too eyecatching enough to shift the focus anywhere other than onto Casaca herself.
Now for the thing that got mentioned so much you made a blog about it and yes I mean Casca's spine. People pointed out how the spine is seemingly bend inward and out of shape. Here I'm going to stretch things by adding logic into this:
First considering the size of both Casaca (165cm & 50kg) and Griffith (178cm & 66kg), it does make sense for Casaca's posture to be the way it is due to Griffith's weight on her smaller frame and she is adjusting to it having presumably just eaten him. There is also the fact that the way Casca is framed isn't fully sidewards on but slighty turned to the right warping the perpective and impressing on the viewer that the struture is out.
Personally I'd suggest that more shine could have been added to Casaca's hair and skin like on her breasts or shoulders to show the light source to further emphasize the moisture of the water, I also feel the three spit droplets by her mouth aren't needed.
Aside from these, you have used great detail in the shading showing her musculature, the bulges of the belly itself, Casaca's battle scars and the colour contrast of her nipples & lips.
Lastly, Personally I would like to see a followup of this maybe showing Casca walking onto the bank holding the belly or something along those lines. Hope this has been helpful and looking forward to seeing more from you Killer :3
Posted by KillerPerro 6 years ago Report
Thanks for overall enjoying the piece. The real joy was making vore art around Casca.
The initial sketch was done in 30 minutes, with added muscle definition. I didn't really refine it, wouldn't care too because I still like the piece flawed or not, this is a sketch if anything. A very lucky one, but anatomy wasn't taken too much into account.
I'm glad you like the details. I mostly wanted to loosen myself with this piece. I did try out a lot of things for the first time here, but I'm satisfied with the result.
Glad you liked it! :D
Posted by S0methingWicked9 4 years ago Report
This is absolutely fantastic Good job.