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Elastic mom does a justice.
Funny that I've had a Helen Parr stand-in since my first year of writing fetish stories, but this is my first go at writing the woman herself.
I've seen a lot of
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Posted by TW 6 years ago Report
I get where you were going at the ending, but it seemed a bit abrupt and didn't flow... Overall very interesting take, and adding Violet may be able to do the same, that leaves a lot of interesting scenarios.
Posted by GoTee1 6 years ago Report
I initially considered doing more, but I decided to try and keep it short and sweet.
The implication was unfortunately more just an accident with Helen stretching her hands rather than implying Violet could do the same. I wanted this to work specifically because of Helen's stretching rather than the usual 'well also I can do this' approach to vore.
Posted by C107galaxytachyon 5 years ago Report
Seen a lot of what?
Posted by GoTee1 5 years ago Report
Been a while since I posted this, but I believe the description was meant to say something like 'a lot of Elastigirl eating her kids, so I thought it'd be refreshing to have her eat someone to protect them instead.'
Posted by C107galaxytachyon 5 years ago Report
Of course: though you didn’t exactly make it obvious as too whether she intends to digest Evelyn or not.
Posted by GoTee1 5 years ago Report
I mean, I don't see what else she would do with her at this point.
Posted by pendingdelete02g2698b 5 years ago Report
Is it bad that I'm more interested in Sir Prize as a great character concept that I am in the actual vore part?
Posted by GoTee1 5 years ago Report
Absolutely not. Where's my money, Pixar?