Posted by Nugget1138 6 years ago Report

Well, at least if she can’t be queen of dragons she can be the queen of dragon dung

Posted by Philosoraptor 6 years ago Report

Excellent, well-written story rich in description and a largely realistic account of Dany's digestion. I think it could have been more enjoyable if read before we knew Dany lived on long past this period when the dragons were still so young and relatively small instead of now being an 'alternative GofT universe'. Most of the digestive descriptions were spot on save the part about some of the previous mammalian prey's fur or hair being digested away, as being made of keratin, it would not dissolve at all. The pellet composed of Dany's long head hair seems very realistic, as it would be difficult to slide through the relatively small pyloric sphincter, as would the much shorter hair of goats, deer and similar prey, though certainly a few random strands would have probably made it through. The larger, indigestible jewelry contained in the gastric pellet was a similarly realistic touch. The sloppy nature of the feces was good as there was so little fibrous material to give it bulk, and it was pleasing to see the bones thoroughly digested, as it would have been impossible for them to pass intact into the small intestines of such a relatively small predator, (not to mention how efficient reptilian digestive systems are at dissolving even the densest bone). I could imagine a few of Dany's keratin nails, and enamel coated teeth being seen in the scat as well as any of the smaller bits of jewelry like rings. One thing that did seem absent though was an ample portion of lumpy, yellowish white uric acid (not unlike warming vanilla ice cream),as well as a bit of liquid urine being dumped from the cloaca at the same time as the feces, as we see in the dumps of both reptiles and birds. All in all, though, very well done story, and such a pleasure to read the rare one here in which the predator doesn't impossibly defecate an intact, grinning skull, complete, of course, with magically still attached mandible. Thanks for sharing!

Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report

I wrote it accurately for the most part. I made a few changes based on my own head cannon and what I wanted to do with the story. for example, I imagine dragon digestion is more efficient then lesser reptiles. I didn't explicitly say it can digest hair it just does a good job at ruining it in deer and other beasties, so it partially digests it, but not sufficiently to lose its form, hence the tickling back door remark on its normal exit. also depending on who you ask some snakes can digest keratin, so I went with the safe middle ground and did a mixture of both as the plot allowed for it.

in regard to lack of teeth and nails in the turd, that was a stylistic choice. I wanted Drogon to strip any of her everything, her new body being nothing like the hot woman who had taken the one-way trip, not a single remnant of her former form passing through his conveyor system of a gastrointestinal tract, hence the lack of straggling hairs as well. there was no jewelry in the turd because I based it off a scene from the show, where she was only wearing a necklace and bracelet, so no shiny rings to leave in the droppings. the same reason why I failed to mention the uric pellets, as I have done so in the past with a few of my snake stories, I debated adding it, but in my mind, I think the sopping wet turds is a more powerful image, then a hodgepodge of assorted waste products.

I am very glad you enjoyed it enough to leave such a long and thought out comment, if you like realistic digestion, I tackle it primarily with my snake stories. and am sure to write more stories with this sort of digestion style in the future.

Posted by Philosoraptor 6 years ago Report

I mention such things as I have kept reptiles of all types for many years and therefor very familiar with the digestive processes of many different species. Some writers do appreciate authentic details, but I didn't realize that you were already quite familiar yourself. Probably the most efficient of all reptilian digesters are the crocodilians (which in truth are more closely related to bird, than they are other reptiles), which even grind down keratin fur, hooves, claws and horns to unidentifiable paste, but this is with the help of a gizzard like stomach containing stones and the occasional metal object inadvertently swallowed along with occasional human prey. I agree that if scientifically classified, dragons would be archosaurs, the 'high reptiles', like the dinosaurs, pterosaurs, crocodilians and birds, but being flyers, would need to digest food a lot faster than crocs, so probably not quite as efficiently. It would be interesting to speculate in a future story the staggering amount of humans and/or livestock it would take to 'fuel' Dany's dragons in their awesome, 'Season 7' size, while on campaign far from the ocean where they seem to normally feed the most. A shame they never showed such a thing in the show, which would be quite unforgettable if they dared to do so.

Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report

it is fun things to think about, i am a animal scientist specialising in entomology and herpetology is my second love, so when it comes to digestion and other factors i have a much wider understanding of the field then is probably healthy.

from the got cannon, it is pretty savage when season 7 dragons start feasting, if you read a world of ice and fire they actually hint and mention things like the logistics of such things. i have a snake vore commission coming up in the very near future, and i am going to ask how far the buyer wants me to go in realism. so in the next few weeks its very possible i might put out a snake vore story with full realistic vore, unlike the watered down version with fantasy elements that is more common. its going to be full tour, attack, swallow, digestion disposal, so its going to be a good little expedition into snake biology, a bit to intimate for the girl involved, but hey, adventure is for the brave, and the dead ;).

Posted by Philosoraptor 6 years ago Report

I guess I will have to check out A World of Ice and Fire. Though there is a lot to like about the GofT TV series, there is a lot of really stupid stuff in it too. One of the dumbest was when Jaime Lannister was able to get his horse to attack Drogon on the ground. The fool who wrote that in is probably ignorant of the fact that Roman cavalry horses were absolutely terrified of just elephants when they first saw them, let alone a dragon fifty times the mass of an elephant. I would be happy to give the upcoming snake story a critique and provide any suggestions before you formally post it if you want to send it to me by PM.

Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report

perhaps i am quite confidant in how it will be written, but i would appreciate your input once its written and posted.

and yes that horse would have shat its self irl.

Posted by Kasra 6 years ago Report

Really impressive! Exceptionally detailed, you've done amazing work with this.

Posted by serpentegigante 6 years ago Report

that dragon likes big butts :) then ...

Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report

all the better to bulge their throats, on the short ride down.

Posted by Mushussu 6 years ago Report

Absolutely loved reading this, top tier vore writing; ever considered a version where Drogon loses?

Just a thought!

Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report

Dany eating a dragon, now that is a humorous thought, though i feel it is something better captured in a image,which regrettably is something i am incapable of drawing.

Posted by Mushussu 6 years ago Report

Of course, of course. I imagine it could be well represented in both myself, but it was just an idea.

Posted by Thunder987654 2 years ago Report

drogon...gosh.. i would do anything for him... drogon is always gonna be one of my top 3 favorite movie dregs.. i really wish there was more drogon fanfiction.. he sure do disserve it❤