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Tags: Alicorn Alicorn prey choose your ending Clone Cruel Pred degrading Digestion Disposal Dominating Predator dream F/F Fatal got strangely philosophical at one point. Licking Masturbation multiple choice My Little Pony pellet Pony Pony Prey Princess Luna Rape sadistic predator sodomy tantabus the forgotten one Unbirth way to much drool writing
Well, Ratway and his little party are down in the sewers, Luna is having her own issues.
an evil fragment of her soul is back, and it wants her to make a nice wriggling bulge in its midriff.
multiple choice story, one good, one bad.
this has been what I have been working on for the last few days, as I wanted to build on Luna's character a little, as well as a few other things.
firstly I was told that the theme of the Vorepone discord for the art jam this month was clones. now I know for a fact that what will come from that will be vanilla stuff like the mirror pool. not that I am knocking that, more vore content is always good, I just like to see fresh ground instead of the retreading of the safe and firm.
because of this, I decided to move up the Tantabus story on my todo list. no disrespect meant I just feel that most artists don't cover stuff from the later seasons with a sufficient lathering of vore. and I just felt the Tantabus is a great opportunity to do so.
I used a bit of nightmare on elm street logic for the disposal end, but hey its fetish fic noncannon vore ending, if I can get disposal in I am going to do so ;).
my main goal in this was just to add a bit more of the forgotten one storyline onto paper, well at the same time reminding folks that the Tantabus still exists and it is a fun little pred if folks want to utilize a dream monster.
it has great potential as well, as it could eat ponies in their dreams, thus making them vegetables in the real world, sort of like a Freddy Kreuger only ponified, which is quite scary and would make for some great peril vore. I have more intentions to use this beastie in the forgotten one in the future so I know at the very least it will make a return to ekas.
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Posted by Punisherfan123 6 years ago Report
I would like a sequel where Celestia fucks the Tantabus after it magically gets its own form and they rape luna together and then they take turns swallowing luna whole and digesting her perpetually and they shit her soul onto her physical form that they keep reforming to torture over and over for eternity whenever they want, with luna left out in public magically bound to her binding chains, magically reforming every time she dies. It's nice, but you didn't focus anywhere near enough on luna gettin tortured and her physical and mental pain. It also wasn't cruel enough for the worthless whore.
Posted by GilPix 6 years ago Report
Thems the brakes Luna, you Princess one minute and next your digested and gone leaving way for a my powerful opponent to take your place
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
as is the natural ecology of the climb to power, the strong trounce the weak, and Luna was the weak.