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From One Punishment to Another By DeadStrategicCactus -- Report

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Ariel Achall checks in on a lover of his only to discover she's been grounded for a party she went to instead of being with him that night. So thus, Ariel decides its time another lover is added to his figure... though the rest of his night doesn't go as he hoped.

So first and foremost, I want to give thanks to  YourFriendComputer for giving me the inspiration for this story's premise a while ago in a server we both used to be in. It took me way too long to get this story out there and done.

Secondly, I want to thank my friend  VoreishWhore who allowed me to have his character Miu make a cameo here. I felt it was very important that she did.

Thirdly, I really meant to have this story done much sooner but due to real life stuff and actual health issues it had been delayed. I also experimented with this story to see in regards to typing it up in a different word processor to see what the results would be. So if it looks too weird I'm just going to delete it and reupload it later after moving it to the word processor I usually use.

And with this story, both Ariel and his mother Alice have made their debut. Next up is Crystal. Oh yeah, spot the references everyone. This story has quite a bit of them.

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ItsSongxing

Posted by ItsSongxing 6 years ago Report

Then Ariel gets called asking where Lisa is, and he immediately busts out,
"I did not eat her, it's not true, it's bullshit, I did not eat her, I did NAHT."

Joke's aside, Ariel is a good boy, and as always your creativity shows with how he got rid of Lisa's soul. However, he should totally eat Miu as payback for Alice eating /his/ harem, show her how that feels!

DeadStrategicCactus

Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 6 years ago Report

He'd never eat Miu if the chance existed for him to seduce her into being his instead of Alice's. That's just how he works.

Kelly

Posted by Kelly 6 years ago Report

Haha thats so funny mark anyways how is your sexlife ?

DeadStrategicCactus

Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 6 years ago Report

Let's go eat, huh?

Kelly

Posted by Kelly 6 years ago Report

chirp chirp

DeadStrategicCactus

Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 6 years ago Report

You're our favorite customer.

Kelly

Posted by Kelly 6 years ago Report

Bye Doggy