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Our hero gets to know her new companion and make some head way digesting the morning feast...
Edit: I had to take some images out to make the file small enough to upload. See all images here: https://www.deviantart.com/tgawsome/art/Ch-6-around-the-bonfire-vore-763190817
Here it is Ch6 finally. I do apologize for the delays but despite: work, holidays, and a tropical storm knocking out power. It is done. What to expect. Lots of belches and heavy digestion with plot. its a slow chapter but I put some good stuff in it due to being delayed so often. Now for some much needed shutouts:
First is Gage73t here on the portal. It was his suggestion that I show the digestive prosses a bit more in the screen shots. He also submitted some questions for Chista to answer. They were: how she can eat a live person an maybe show it to him.
May also ask how many she's eaten.
Second we move on to: DthB4Dshnr over on Devient art. the idea of mentioning gut flora is something he brought up in a rp that was just something I had never thought of before.
Third shoutout is: ALL OF YOU GUYS! people like The K, Greywolf18, DOOMGUY, and just EVERYONE. There's just too many to list! You guys favoreting and watching my stuff is what makes this all worth it. Thank you!
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Posted by Graywolf18 6 years ago Report
I guess Jules knows now that Synth can, in-fact, dream like normal people. :)
I think we should start sharing what our fav pics are. You put a lot of work into making them after all. :D Mine is the pic of Chista waking up and popping her joints... cause it shows of that juicy butt. :3
Up north must have different stigmas on what not to do. She'll learn real quick to never say or think "what's the worst that can happen?"
Posted by tgawsome 6 years ago Report
Turns out androids don't dream of electric sheep. Its getting eaten by the woman sleeping next to you. SCIENCE! Although in sure the institute writes off dreams as the synths just running simulations. aka dreaming.
The booty is something that needs more love in my pics. I mean Chista worked hard on it. Or rather the raiders, dogs, cat, molerats, ect that make up the padding.
Its that Canadian positivity showing.
Posted by The K 6 years ago Report
I don't know which part I like more. The part where she belched in his face or that entire sleeping segment. Both were the highlights of the story for me and of course all the digestion going on inside her bloated sloshy gut. That dog and raider sure had a long trip through her digestive system and I like how you highlighted it all. And her belly was massive when she was sleeping with it upwards. That was amazing. It's so great to read one of your stories again.
Posted by tgawsome 6 years ago Report
Personally the belching in his face was the best part. As for the canine and raider, Chista's big girl so they have quite the trek ahead of them still. Also glad you enjoyed the story. Hopeful next chapter won't have so many "interruptions" when writing it.
Posted by lyingunderfire 6 years ago Report
Your writing of digestion, one of if not my favorite part of vore, has got me hooked!
The way you can describe digestion over multiple parts without becoming repetitive is quite impressive.
Posted by tgawsome 6 years ago Report
Thankyou! It is a bit of a challenge to describe digestion without using the same description over and over again. However, It seems that I have succeeded in that goal.
Posted by lyingunderfire 6 years ago Report
The way you swap back and forth from first-person while the prey is alive and third-person after they expire is a simple but effective way to achieve this.
Posted by tgawsome 6 years ago Report
Yay! I'm special! Ya I like to track the process from start to end.
Posted by Sempai13 6 years ago Report
Excellent chapter, in my book, if not just for the digestion and sleeping segment alone!
First things first, again, loved the digestion sequence and how you give Chista's body system such character is lovely. It's becoming more and more apparent that Chista's gut is an enforcer, as well as a bit of a showoff (upstaging the intestines work) and a bit of bully (what it wants it tends to get :P )
Loved the night cap scene. Like pretty much all of it, haha. I like to think Chista's gut and Jules got to know each other little more "personally" after the night was through! Jules even gave an unintentional belly rub, Chista seemed to enjoy it at any rate, haha! Personally wouldn't mind seeing something along the lines of this again.
Loved the Face belches too- more than I thought I would (not that didn't like it before..)
Posted by tgawsome 6 years ago Report
Thank you! Chista's stomach does tend to get what it want's much to Chista's chagrin sometimes. I think poor Jules and Chista's gut are going to get to know each other rather well as there adventure continues. Hopefully he will adapt to it especially to the belching. Chista finds it too funny to stop.
Posted by Sempai13 6 years ago Report
A wise ogre once said "Better out then in, I always say!" hehe
But yeah, I look forward to what kind of relationship (punishment? Maybe in Jules mind? lol) blossoms moving forward with Chista, her gut and friends :P
Posted by tgawsome 6 years ago Report
God help Jules when it does have to come "out" if you know what I mean.
Posted by Sempai13 6 years ago Report
Haha, oh I understand alright and I *very* much look forward to it. It is among my favorite things in vore, after all <3
I suppose I'll send a prayer to Chista's bowels to hold it together, for Jules sake... lol
Posted by Hayden 5 years ago Report
Chista's definitely one of my favourite characters of all time now. I really enjoy your stories.
Posted by tgawsome 5 years ago Report
Thank you! It's always great to hear that Chista's got a new fan!
Posted by Hayden 5 years ago Report
She's a wonderful character. You did a fantastic job with her.